So, this will pretty much be my poetry thread. This is a poem for my crush. He knows I like him, but he only sees me as a really close friend. I know you'll never feel the same nor will you notice me But I really beg to differ when you say we're not meant to be You may be three years older, but age really means nothing When you're so in love like I am with you, I know there could be something Age is only a number, such as three, six, or nine I'm sorry I love you as more than a friend, I just wanted you to be mine And looks don't show the truth, that's all personality On the outside, someone's overweight; on the inside, sugar sweet I'm sorry I'm not perfect, I'm sorry I need you so I'm sorry that I'll miss you when it's time for you to go I'm sorry that my crush on you is filling you with hate I'm sorry that while you leave for college, I simply sit here and wait Wait for you to someday see that you are my life The one to hold and cherish until the day I die (his full name here), although you'll never feel the same, I still dream about you being my love someday...
your poem has very nice rhythm and the ryhmes are slightly original; its nice to see someone that can express their sensitive feelings so well in a few stanzas. good job!
