Knocked Back, Lovely

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  1. Pistol Schoolboy Gummi Ship Junkie

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    Knocked Back, Lovely
    Frappé, Beau Retour

    Knocked back into the next century of desire.
    I see people collecting visions across my persona.
    Revealing the hurt in my eyes, I look up to these strangers.
    Only to see the white and pink faces of concern and loveliness.
    I don't know if I'm in Heaven, or just somewhere else.
    Dream? Not at all. I'm lost in a different dimension of my dream.

    This mask, this persona, I hold before my face.
    Ripped off by the impact of warped transportation.
    I see the vintage sight of a perfect grassfield.
    This all seemed like a dream, but I could feel this certain breeze bursting on my cheeks.
    I could feel it, the reality that this enchanting area was.
    Looking up from my hands to the sky, I saw the clouds.
    The people, they all had smiles. This was like Heaven.
    Only the extremities of poets could imagine this desire I had for this winged sanctuary.

    Giggles, whispers, I adapted to this.
    Biographies of lovely faces and personalities, I could see everything about them through one look on their pupils.
    So many things stuck out to me. But one, mastered it all.
    A visage of vintage, graphic display of a delicate angel.
    My eyes did not fool me, as the girl looked before me.
    But I was so heart shaken, so heart aching.
    I blinked once more, and found myself, woken in my sheets.
    No importance of beauty, just the ever so blank sheets of turquoise and crystal.
    And so I said one final sentence,
    Before laying back down on a feathered softener for my temples.

    "Please. Let this dream reside in my memories."
     
  2. Jayn

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    Wow, that was absolutely beautiful. I loved it! Very nice.
     
  3. Pistol Schoolboy Gummi Ship Junkie

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    Thank you, Jayn. I'm really glad that you like it.
    And I should say the same for your poems. You have a distinct, cute style.