The SOTW is gaming, not....whatever that is. XD Anyway, very flat and monotone. Add some spice. Soft colors and soft gradients would show some light for this. Keep it up.
Then use a Hello Kitty game render. Not one from the cartoon. XD (if it is a cartoon). Ah who cares. lol
I think it's good =] I would, though, considering I the fact that I know nothing about these things. Still waiting for Dad to get me Photoshop :3