kingdom of light(my first story!)

my first story...enjoy!!!
kingdom of light
chapter one:Riku

One day, in a little town called Spira, a brother and sister are getting ready for the day
"Sora, get dressed! We need to get to the beach for your training!" Anniexo yelled.
"I'm comin', I'm comin'!" Sora said. As they were walking, a lightning bolt went towards Anniexo "watch-out!" Said Sora as he threw a wall of ice in front of Anniexo
"Thanks bro, Riku get the heck out of our way!" Anniexo said angrily.
"Why should I? I want to kill your fifteen year old brother and you why would I want to back off and let you pass?" Riku Said chuckling.
“C'mon Sora, let’s finish your training for today.” As Anniexo and Sora walked pass him, Riku threw a silent bolt of lightning at Sora and Anniexo.
"Die!" Riku said evilly. Suddenly, a wall of earth rose up in front of him.
“Thanks Toph.” Sora said. "We owe you one."
"God Toph!” Riku said angrily.
"DIE!" as he threw a fist a vine with roses (thorny vines) caught his punch.
“What??" he said in astonishment.
“I might have to hang low now, but you do know I train my bro!” Anniexo said proudly.
"You want some more?" Toph asked.
“If not then I suggest you run!" As Riku ran away, Toph asked,
"Who was that guy anyway?"
"His name is Riku. He wants to kill Anniexo and me but mostly me because my elemental power is water. He is afraid of you and Anniexo because his lightning doesn’t affect your elemental powers" Sora answered
"Thanks Toph, for helping us, Sora, we need to get to the beach…now.” Anniexo said.

sorry its short,im in fifth grade...sorry critix...:)

 

Well you know I like it haha, and I hope every one else likes it

 

I really love it. You're a good writer. :)

 

thanx,i just hate the fact that its so short!!!!! at myself.

i actually forgot about this but this story is devoted to anniexo because she inspired me to write thanx sis!