Kingdom Hearts- To Watch You Go

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  1. flowergothic Twilight Town Denizen

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    I wrote this a few months ago- enjoy! =)
    (Told by Kairi's perspective)

    As I saw you, Sora,

    I just didn't know:

    I saw you, but only

    To watch you go.

    As we stood on the rocks

    And watched them shatter,

    We thought to ourselves,

    "Does it even matter?"

    While stretching without pride,

    We held tight

    But then Sora told me

    Something in might:

    "Kairi, remember what you said?

    I'm always with you too.

    But, instead of a lie,

    That sorta seems quite true."

    "Anyway, I'll come back to you,

    I promise! I swear!"

    But as we lost our grip,

    I just couldn't bear.

    I should've known.

    Sora lost his grip

    And we let go.

    I wanted to cry,

    But I held it back.

    Even though it was a pain,

    Like sitting on a thumbtack.

    But as we parted further

    Our own dreams did collide.

    Stars started falling

    Only circles, it was a surprise.

    We both gasped

    It was an amazing sight.

    The Island was returning,

    The beauty and the light.

    As we watched, Sora said his final words to me:

    "Kairi, I'll come back,

    Riku will too

    We won't lack!"

    "All of us will be together soon!

    Riku and I have the might to-"

    He was gone.

    Out of my sight.

    The portal was closing

    My head tilted down

    But I knew I would see Sora and Riku again.

    What was next was not to cause a frown.

    Comets, all around.

    Sora did this to ME,

    I knew it,

    I almost shouted out in glee!

    The next day,

    I was in the caves,

    Exploring the drawings,

    When I saw Sora's crave.

    It was us, together, like we left it.

    But something changed

    Sora was giving something, a papou fruit, to me,

    Right there, my heart really banged.

    I imaged Sora,

    Drawing the piece,

    I cried a bit,

    But it was still an amazing masterpiece.

    I drew again,

    The same type,

    But instead I was giving a fruit to Sora.

    One that was ripe.

    Well, I last saw him there.

    Three months have past.

    And I still remember,

    The lucky charm I gave him, still in his grasp.

    And I know his promise

    That he will come back.

    And I still don't believe it's a lie.

    Not a fib, not a tack.

    To end this poem;

    I say that I now know,

    I saw Sora, but only

    To watch him GO.



    I hope you liked it! =)
     
  2. Te Deum Hollow Bastion Committee

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    That's great! No spelling/grammar mistakes, that's even better.

    I've tried writing a song or some sort of fanfic about KH [see: Waking Up] but I can never get into it.

    Keep up the good work! I expect moar!
     
  3. flowergothic Twilight Town Denizen

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    Thanks for the praise. =) I'm writing more, that's for sure.