Kingdom Hearts: The Key To Hearts

Story:
After a long and tiring journey, Jiminy and the king beging to organize all of Jiminys journal. In their process they find a mystery message that said; "Straeh ot Yek eht teg tsum ew. With doubts.

-Intro-
The Secret Message

Disney Castle, a peaceful castle where the king, Mickey Mouse and hes trustful assistant, Jiminy Cricket are organazing all of Jiminy's writtings from its journal, and so they talk of their lifes of journeys...

"Hows been your life in journeys Jiminy?" Asked the king while classifing the Heartless and Nobodys

"It's been great and bad," Replied Jiminy while classifing each persons location

"Why do you ask your majesty?" Asked Jiminy while still classifing each persons location

"No, nothing, its just that I had many expirience with dreadful journeys and quests," Replied the king while still classifing the Heartless and Nobodys

"Like what journeys your highness?" Asked Jiminy while finishing classifing each persons location

"It's been time since that dreadful event involving the summoning of Kingdom Hearts," Replied the king while finishing classifing the Heartless and Nobodys

"Wh-what happened your majesty?" Jiminy dramatized asked

"The moment to reveal the truth is not far from here," Sighed the king to Jiminy

As they kept looking in the journal they find a mysterious message that Jiminy doesn't remember writing...

"What's this?" Asked the king while reading the message

"What's what?" Asked Jiminy to the king

"It says...Straeh ot Yek eht teg tsum ew...strange message," Said the king to Jiminy

"Hmm...it must be another language," Replied Jiminy while looking at the message

"Let's see if the computer can translate it," Said the king

The king opens a portal using the keyblade. They walk right into the portal and find themselves in Radiant Garden(Hollow Bastion). The king and Jiminy walk their way to the castle and finally arrived to it. The king and Jiminy began to transfer the message in the computer...

"Hmm, hmm, hmm, here we go," Said the king while transferring all the data in the computer

"Is it completely transferred?" Asked Jiminy to the king

"Yes now let's wait for the... wait...this isn't right," Said the king while examining the computer

"What happened your majesty?" Asked Jiminy while looking at the computer's response to the transferring

"It says that these file has been examined before," Replied the king with a doubtful face

"Strange...no one has had acces to my journal exept me," Said Jiminy to the king while looking at the message

As they kept looking, the king noticed a strange black figure in lower level of the computer room...

"Jiminy, do you remember seing anyone entering the room besides us?" Whispered the king to Jiminy

"No sir," Jiminy whispered to the king

"Why?" Whispered Jiminy

"Let's go to the lower levels of the room," Whispered the king to Jiminy

As they kept walking lower from the room, they reach the Center Heartless Room. They noticed a small opening beneeth them and they open it. They them find themselves in the lowest level of Ansem The Wise's Castle...

"This place...is a secret experiment room" Said the king while looking the room

"You are right your highness," Replied Jiminy while looking at the background

As they kept examining the room they find a door opened and hear someone dialoguing...

"It's been a long time my friend," Said the misterious voice

"How do you like this dark and empty place?" Asked the voice

"I wanted you to expirience the moments I was in those cells you and your friends impriosend me!" Said the voice

" WHILE YOU WERE PLAYING WITH YOUR KEY WITH THOSE ENRICHED TERRA AND VEN, I WAS SUFFERING IN A EMPTY HOLLOW! NO THANKS TO YOU THREE!" Screamed the voice with a tone full of hatred

"Why don't I introduce you to the visitors behind the door? Mwahahahaha!" The voice laught maniacly and grabed the king and Jiminy

"Let us go you mysterious man!" Said the king to the enigmatic man

"Mwhahahahahaha! Do you think im gonna let you free?" Laughted the enigmatic man

The enigmatic man leaves from a portal and they arrive at a small piece of land in a dark place where they begin to talk...

"This is where I was all these years Mouse!"

"Wait your _______! What I can't say _______ anymore! What have you done!" Asked the king with a violent tone

"Since the day your friends imprisioned in this enriched place I have been practicing the dark arts of the hearts forbidden powers!" Replied the enigmatic man while holding the king and Jiminy

"Let us go you foolish man!" screamed Jiminy without peril

"This is your end Mouse and Cricket! Your hearts belong in eternal darkness!

The enigmatic man raises his entire body to the dark sky and begins to vibrate. Hes body begins to turn black and purple and begins to achieve a jellatinous form that absorbs the king and Jiminy.

Hours passed and the enigmatic man gains the ability to become Mickey or Jiminy. the man walks back to the upper levels of Radiant Garden and sees the message written by the computer...

"Password required," Said the computer

The enigmatic man enters the password and finds information about what the king was searching about...

"So...the king was looking about the Straeh ot Yek eh?" Said the man to himself

"Then lets pleace him!" The man achives the form of the king and leaves to Disney Castle.

The man arrives to Disney Castle...

"Welcome back your highness, how are you today?" Asked a castle guard while looking at the king

"Im a little different today my dear guard!" (Yes! I have make this fool into beleaving im the king! Mwahahahahahahahahaha!)

-To Be Continued-

 

Pretty good. I would suggest a little more fluentual words and when you finish dialogue you should use different adjectives.