Kingdom Hearts:The Big Clash

Author's Note:This is my first fan fic so please don't flame me.

Chapter 1

It was a normal day on destiny islands.Sora and Riku were training on the beach,Kairi was playing something,and Roxas and Namine were still resting.
Just then the sky got dark.Sora saw a bottle fly down.It had a note in it.It was the coordinates to the gummi ship."Riku,go get Kairi and I will get the rafts ready"Sora said while running.Sora got the rafts but then a Nobody appeared.This nobody was never seen by him before.It had metal arms with the body of a wildebeast.It roared at Sora.Sora jumped up and did a finisher on him.He fell down into the sand.Just then Roxas comes out of Sora."Hey Sora,thought you could use some help on your quest"said Roxas.Sora nodded.
Riku and Kairi came and Sora and them took off into the ocean.

Chapter 2 coming soon.
What did you think?

 

Space between paragraphs. More detail writing. More creativity and innovation. Don't be lazy and write short short (Extend length of one chapter to 1k-2k). More beautiful words. Stop writing like you don't really wanna write. Write like a real man. Read more. Learn more. Write more. Study more. And you'll be good eventually.

 

Thanks for support.Chapter 2 will come eventually.Chapter 1 was just to get the story started.

 

You'll grow.