Video kingdom hearts riku walks alone

one of the last vids i have done before i take a brake from editing for a while becasue of school
okay the embed code isnt working so heres a link
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=xbaU7CbIe-U

EDIT: Embedded it for you <:
~Stardust

[video=youtube;xbaU7CbIe-U]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=xbaU7CbIe-U[/video]

 

I fixed the embed for you <: .

As for critique on the video itself, I think you did a great job of matching the lyrics. I thought the speaking parts were well-timed, but a little distracting and I probably would have liked it better without them to be honest (However, it's probably just me because I usually dislike that in videos, lol). I think you were struggling to match the beats properly some of the time, whereas other times it was perfect -- I can't tell if that was YouTube throwing off the timing or the actual video, but if it was the video perhaps work on matching beats a little better. I really like the effect you used every time the lyrics said "beat," the sort of heartbeat-looking effect.

Overall, good job. The song makes me nostalgic, haha. Keep up the good work <: .

 

hey thanks for fixing it dont know what went wrongand ya i know the timings off a bit that ones my bad this vid was my first time making a proper video using sony vegas

 

No worries, the problem was that you can't use the HTML embed code from YouTube, you have to use the forum BBCode, which looks like this:

[noparse][video]video URL here[/video][/noparse]

As for the video being your first proper video with Vegas, I'm very impressed in that case -- You didn't go overboard with lots and lots of flashy effects. Again, good job.