Kingdom Hearts: Number 14

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  1. Ansem59 Chaser

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    Chapter 1: A peaceful day

    It was a peaceful day on Destiny Islands. Sora, Riku, and Kairi were all enjoying the day.

    Kairi: "READY?!"

    Sora: "this time I'm gonna beat you!"

    Kairi: "SET!"

    Riku: "I think not..."

    Kairi: "GO!!"

    Riku and Sora took off running as fast as they could towards the tree-toped star

    Kairi: "wow! they have gotten alot faster since they've been gone..."

    Sora took the lead and reached the star before Riku but on his way back he overjumped a tree and fell down

    Sora: "GAAAAAAAAAAAAH!"

    yelled Sora as he crashed into the ground

    Riku reached the star and landed on each tree perfectly gaining the lead on Sora

    Sora got up and realized Riku was ahead of him and darted with all the speed he had

    Riku had almost reached the finish line when Sora came up on the side of him.

    Sora was starting to pass Riku when Riku gave it everything he had

    Sora aqnd Riku both finished at the same time creating nothing more than a tie...

    Sora: "darn! I almost had you!"

    Riku: "your right... you did almost beat me... but you should have known better than that."

    Kairi: "don't worry... you guys always have tomarrow."

    Sora: "yeah, besides it's getting late... we should go back to the main island.

    Riku: "agreed, let's go..."

    They all left and everything seemed fine until they reached the main island where they found Wakka laying on the beach bleeding

    music

    Sora: "WAKKA! ARE YOU ALRIGHT?!"

    Wakka: "s- sora? they came out of nowhere... I didn't expect it..."

    Kairi: "who?!"

    Wakka "org- organi-"

    Wakka passed out

    Dusk Nobodies appeared, surrounding them

    Sora, Riku, and Kairi all got out their keyblades

    the nobodies charged at them

    Kairi, being inexpirenced in fighting the nobodies went to attack but missed when the Dusk slithered out of the way and kicked her down

    Sora: "KAIRI!!!!!"

    Sora charged at the Dusk and used reversal to confuse it

    Then Sora struck the Dusk killing it

    Riku fired his dark aura at one Dusk and destroyed another by striking it with his keyblade

    Sora: "Kairi... are you okay?"

    ???: "you should worry more about yourself then her..."

    A women in a black organization coat came out of a portal with her hood still on

    ???: "becuase she won't know why how you are about to fail her..."
     
  2. Roxaspartanti King's Apprentice

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    "You should write things like this." Soranspartanti said.
     
  3. Ansem59 Chaser

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    there is too much diologue in this story to do that... It would just get boring

    "I like pinapples..." Sora said

    "I like them too" said Riku

    catch my drift?
     
  4. pirateking_luffy Banned

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    i'm liking it so far dude,keep up the story
     
  5. Ansem59 Chaser

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    Sora stood up "who are you?!" Sora called out as he still took notice of the Nobodies around him

    "I am the 14th member of the Organization and am also your doom." said the Nobody with confidence in her voice

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    "I don't care if your the 56th member, the fact is that we will beat you the same way we took care of the other Organization members!" yelled Sora as he was about to charge her but Riku ran right past him charging at the new and confident Organization member

    Three Creeper nobodies came down from the sky, transformed into swords, and flew around the 14th member (like how the keyblades fly around final form sora) with the wave of her hand the the three creepers all flew at Riku. Riku hit two of them out of the way but one hit him in his right arm. his right arm was bleeding badly, and Sora gasped at his good friends injury. Riku switched his keyblade to his left arm and continued his charge at the 14th member.

    "wow... he's tough..." said the monster as she summoned two more creepers. The creepers formed swords again but went in her hands, she charged at Riku with the creeper swords behind her.

    Riku jumped into the air and fired some dark arua blast at her but she whacked them at Sora, who was healing Kairi.Riku landed on the ground and sent some dark arua blast at the ones heading for Sora. The explosion from the two colliding arua blasts sent Sora and Kairi a little of shore into the water.

    Meanwhile when Riku was distracted by firing the second dark arua blasts, Number 14 stabed him into the stomach. Riku gasped in horror as he grabed the creeper sword and tryed to pull it out

    "here... let me help you with that..." said Number 14 as she riped it out of his gut. Riku keeled over and passed out from the pain

    "RIKU!!!!!!!!!" yelled Sora in shock

    "now it's your turn..." said Number 14 charging Sora