Kingdom Hearts: New Generations

Since, I really don't feel like doing this over, the thread I had...died. It died faster than my bird (very bad j/k).

Anyway, there is a link to my work. But before you read it, and give feeback, know this. Only constructive critisim. No flames, no pretentious ****. And absolutely no crap on contiunity and OCs.

You, may, however, smack the **** out of me for OOCness.

It's an AU story. depicting lives of the Organization if Sora had died and the Org had children (OMFG). And they had children with a variety of crosscultural weirdos (the OCs, which belong to my friends).

Oh yeah, crossovers. Since KH is a huge crossover crap anyway, there's going to be characters from FFVII Advent Children (it follows the AC story line), FFVIII, references to FFXII, FFIX and Final Fantasy Cyrstal Chronicles, as well as Star Ocean and a bunch of Disney stuff. And probably King of Fighters Max. Impact if you look hard enough. ><

*Cough* Fairlyodd Parents *Cough, cough*

Part One (The Dream): http://freewebs.com/orgxiiinexgen

^A whole bunch of prologues

Part Two (The Known) http://freewebs.com/orgxiiinexgenii

^The TURK SAGA (as my friend calls it)

Part Three (The Seen) http://freewebs.com/shadowevening

^Other evilness.

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