Traditional Art Kingdom Hearts Manga: Nobodies Return

A manga that I based off of one of my old rps, if you never say it you may get lost but here's the plot: it's pretty much about 15 years after the events of KHII, and a new organization was formed. It revolves around the main character Soru, the son of Sora and Kairi who, after heartless attacked Destiny Islands became a nobody and was taken in by the new Leader of the Organization(my character) . It is also done in the KH manga style

http://rikurep.deviantart.com/art/Nobodies-Return-manga-61987704

The first page is bad since it's my first manga, but it gradually gets better as you go along the pages (most links to the next page aren't there)

 

xDDDD you showed me this the other day, and I am still very impressed. I love how you have portrayed our characters, especially Roxus' constant asking question like a small child :P

I also think that you drew Sarx really well, she is pretty ^^ but you can still see she isn't to be messed with xD (lol she is still to this day my most favourite OC to have ever created and played xD)

I make no attempt to hide my admiration here Reap xD your art skills are fantastic.​

 

Dude, I love your style! xD
But it's really good, nothing seems wrong to me. xDDDD
And it's not bad! It's awesome, I hope you continue!