Kingdom Hearts made up story

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  1. Sorikai Traverse Town Homebody

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    Hey there! I'm writing a made up version of kh 2 but with the same base story but with other characters. I'm in it and I'm the forth member of Sora's team so I was wondering wether u guyz wanted to take part as well. If u do, just fill in this form:


    Name:

    Weapon/abilitie (if u don't want either just put N/A next to it)

    Base story:

    Nature:

    Good bad/bad guy:

    Heartless/Nobodie (only if ur a bad guy)

    Where u wanna appear:

    Bonus character?:

    I'll post the first chapter right now.

    Here's the first chapter but it's more like a prologue cuz it's when Roxas finds Sora.



    Chapter 1
    Summer's end


    ''I hate you so much!'' Roxas said, holding up the Keyblade, ready to strike at DIZ. ''You should share some of that hatred with Sora.'' Diz said, not appearing to be intimmidated by Roxas at all. ''He's far too nice for his own good'' ''No!'' Roxas said. ''My heart belongs to me!'' He charged at DIZ and slashed him with the Keyblade. It went right through him but it didn't seem to cause any damage at all. Roxas looked up, surprised that DIZ was still standing there looking as normal as hot weather in July. ''My apologies, this is only a data based projection.'' DIZ said. ''AAAAAARRRGH!'' Roxas cried, slashing the back of DIZ viliontly. After a while, DIZ dissapeared. Roxas gasped to catch his breath. He was worn out. He looked round and saw the pod that was in the middle of the room open. Inside, was Sora. At first, Roxas didn't recognized him at first because in his dreams, Sora was younger. ''Sora...'' Roxas said. ''You're lucky. It looks like my summer vacation's over.''


    Was that ok? It didn't sound right, like I got all the sentences mixed up but.... I tried. Lemme know wot u think!
     
  2. Sorikai Traverse Town Homebody

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    sure u can just fill out the form at the top of the page and ur in!

    Here's the next chapter, and this is when it get's different.


    Chapter 2
    The awakening of a dazed and confused heroe



    Roxas found himself in darkness. Nothing else, just darkness. He looked around him. He could see he was alone but he could also feel a presence. ''Sora!'' He said, dissapearing. ''Who's there?'' Sora said, stirring from inside of his pod. Three other voices followed Roxas'. ''Sora!'' This one belonged to Donald. ''Wake up! There's no rest for the wicked!'' This one came from Kirsty. ''Wake up!'' This one came from Goofy. The three of them were outside the pod waking for Sora to wake up... at last. Finaly, the pod opened and a drowsy Sora streched his arms up to the air. ''Finaly!'' Kirsty said. ''Guys!'' Sora said, jumping out on top of the others. ''When did you wake up?'' He asked. ''A few hours sooner than you did, that's for sure!'' Kirsty said. ''That was some nap!'' A tiny voice said, coming from Sora's hood. ''You mean we were asleep?'' Sora said, as Jiminy hopped out of his hood and onto the floor. ''I guess we must of been, or I don't think we'd be so drowsy.'' He said. ''When d'you think we went to sleep?'' Goofy said. We all folded our arms and went over what had happened. ''Let's see... We defeated Ansem, restored peace to the world, found Kairi, and then we went to look for Riku. I think that's right so far.'' Sora said. ''Nothing about what happened AFTER all that?'' Kirsty asked. Sora shook his head. We all let out a sigh. ''What does your journal say, Jiminy?'' Goofy asked. Jiminny took out his journal and started flipping through the pages. ''Gee, there's only one sentence: Thank Naminé. Hmmm... I wonder who that is?'' He said. Everybody shook their heads except Kirsty who kept thinking. ''That name sounds familiar.... Oh yeah! Naminé!'' ''You know who that is?'' Donald asked her exitedly. ''Sort of... It's kind of fuzzy. I remember Sora waking us all up in the middle of the night when we were in those feilds, but I don't really remember the rest.'' Kirsty said. ''Maybe you'll remember later.'' Sora said. ''Yeah, I guess....'' ''Some journal THAT is!'' Donald scolded at Jiminny. ''Oh, uh, he he... W-why don't we find out where we are?'' Jiminny spluttered. They all sighed and went to look around.
     
  3. Luna561 Traverse Town Homebody

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    Name: Alex
    Weapon: keyblade
    Base story: She was a nobody 4 three years. But her sister gave her a heart to live her life again.
    Nature: lives in the darkness but has light to have a keyblade for the dark and ight.
    Good bad/bad guy: good
    Where u wanna appear: When Sora wakes up
    Bonus character: She has two friends like Donld and goofy. Their names are Sarah and Luna. Both girls

    g2g for now. bye
     
  4. Sorikai Traverse Town Homebody

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    K welcome aboard. Do u want 2 appear in Twilight Town, or in the actual mansion when Sora wakes up? and could u describe ur keyblade 4 me plz??
     
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    Name: Ty

    Weapon/ability: contorts the space around objects to do his bidding (like the force)
    Base story: Ty was another character who lost his world and arrived on Traverse Town. But when the worlds were fixed, he refused to go back, books passage and takes up residence on Hollow Bastion, occasionally helping out the Restoration Commitee but his main focus is traveling the worlds and using experiences as background for a story he is writing.

    Nature: uses humor as a defense mechanism, otherwise a voice of guidance and reason?

    Good bad/bad guy: Good guy, doesn't like to fight unless he has to

    Heartless/Nobody: N/A

    Where u wanna appear: Hollow Bastion

    Bonus character?: Not exactly bonus character, but he carries around a faded picture from his old world of his love interest, Natalia. (maybe he meets up with her?)
     
  6. Sorikai Traverse Town Homebody

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    Welcome aboard! that nature description was kinda confusing but I think i no wot u mean.... I think.
     
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    I wanna join 2!

    Name: Trane
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    Weapon/abilitie:
    Soul reaper (keyblade)...ablity:his power is from the darkness and it cangive an ablity to transform it to anything
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    Base story: Well his brother has killed Tranes parents to gain the ultimate power...
    Trane has gone to twilight town cuz his world dissapeared.
    his left hand is cursed by a 10000 year old magic
    sometimes it takes over his mind when hes angry.....


    Nature:male

    Good bad/bad guy: neutral

    Heartless/Nobodie (only if ur a bad guy): ...nothing

    Where u wanna appear:Twilight town
     
  8. Sorikai Traverse Town Homebody

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    Here's the next chapter.



    Chapter 3
    Lost



    When the four of them were outside, they took a look around. They seemed to be in the middle of a forest. ''Well this is different.'' Kirsty said, feeling around one of the broken statues to see if anything was there. ''Yeah. Don't think we've ever been to a forest before.'' Sora said, going out the gate and opening a chest that was there. ''And Deep Jungle was chopped meat?'' ''That was a jungle.'' ''Same thing.'' ''No it's not. A jungle has a lot of those string thingys, uh... what d'you call them?'' Goofy said. ''Vines?'' Donald said. ''Yeah that's it!'' ''Does it really matter what a jungle is at the moment?'' Kirsty said, giving up with the statue and going out the gate to join Sora. ''Maybe we should just keep going Sora, there's nothing here'' She said. ''Yeah, maybe your right. The chest was empty as well.'' Sora said, pointing at the open chest with his keyblade. ''That's odd. We've never found an empty chest before.'' ''Yeah, it's like someone beat us to it.'' ''But, I thought us and the king were the only ones with keyblades. ''That's what I thought. Obviously not.'' ''Any idea who it could be?'' Sora shook his head. ''Donald, Goofy! We're moving on!'' Sora called to Donald and Goofy. They all went into the woods with Sora and Kirsty leading the way, Donald and Goofy right on their heels. ''Did you remember what happened yet, Kirsty?'' Goofy asked. She shook her head. ''This place looks kind of familiar, but I don't know why. All I remember is Naminé. But even she's kind of fuzzy. It's like she keeps changing from Naminé to Kairi.'' ''Kairi?'' Sora said, looking round at Kirsty. ''Yeah... I think. It's still kind of fuzzy, I'll try later.'' Sora nodded and they continued their way through the woods and out into a big town center. They saw a train go by which carried several passengers. ''Hey look! A train! Let's go for a ride!'' Sora said, running towards it. Kirsty grabbed his hood and pulled him back. ''Don't be so pathetic, Key-boy. We still haven't figured out where we are.'' Sora choked a little. ''No need to strangle me!''
    ''Ok you two, cut it out.'' Donald said. Sora and Kirsty ignored him. ''Come on, let's just follow the train, it should lead us somewhere.'' Kirsty said. Sora nodded and they all chased after the train.

    Uh.. nature not gender. apart from that it's fine, welcome aboard!

    Chapter 4
    Alex meets four unusual people



    It was the middle of a twilit afternoon, and Alex was just finishing off getting rid of the garbage for an elderly man she was helping. She slashed the last bit of garbage with her keyblade and wiped her forehead with the back of her hand. ''Thank you, Alex, that's enough for today. Here's your munny.'' The elderly man said, handing Alex 50 munny. ''Anytime, sir.'' She said, taking the munny and going to leave. She lookd back and waved to the elderly man, just before four people ran past the alley she was in. ''Wait for us!'' Donald said, getting tired already from chasing the train. ''Slow down!'' Goofy said. Kirsty and Sora were starting to get tired as well. ''Can't we take a break Sora? I don't think I can keep chasing this thing.'' Kirsty said, panting and puffing. ''No, we can't afford to get lost here.'' He said. Kirsty, Donald and Goofy groaned and struggled on.

    Meanwhile, Alex was walking home, whistling a tune that had been in her head all day. ''Did you eat bird seed for your breakfast?'' Her friend, Trane said, catching up with her. ''No, I just can't get this tune out of my head.'' Alex said, giggling. ''Well best way to do that is to whistle something else.'' Trane said. ''What have you been up to anyway?'' ''Nothing much, just earning some munny so I can afford to take a trip away for a while. You know, take a break, see morning for once.'' ''I know what you mean.'' Alex said, looking up to the constant twilit sky. ''Well, I better run off home, so, see you later.'' Trone said, turning around to go home. ''Ok, see you!'' Alex said, waving.

    ''Finally!'' Kirsty said, sprawling out on top of the train. ''I didn't think I was going to make that double jump.'' Donald said. ''Me neither.'' Goofy said. ''Come on guys, you act like you haven't ran a mile in a year.'' Sora said. ''We haven't!'' Kirsty said. ''Because of you mixing Naminé up with Kairi, we've been sleeping for over a year! What did you expect us to do! Get up and run around like mad chickens?'' They all went silent. ''What? Something in my teeth?'' ''You remembered!'' They all said at the same time. ''Remembered what?'' ''What you forgot!'' ''Well I gathered that but what?'' ''What happened to us before we went to sleep!'' ''Oh... well you could have said!''

    Alex took Trane's advice and whistled another song. But then that song was stuck in her head. ''I give up.'' She said. It was at that moment when she saw them: A duck, a big thing that looked like a dog on two legs, a boy with spiky hair and a girl. ALL SITTING ON TOP OF THE AFTERNOON TRAIN. She chased after them. ''Hey! Get down from there!'' She called, waving her arms about to get their attention.

    ''Who's that?'' Goofy asked, pointing at a girl that was running along side the train. They all looked to the place where he was pointing. ''Beat's me. She must live here.'' Sora said. ''NEVER.'' Kirsty said sarcastically. ''Think we should get down?'' Donald asked. ''Yeah, maybe she can tell us where we are.'' Sora said. They all jumped off the train and landed on the pathway.

    Alex saw the four people jump off the train and land on the pathway. ''Hey, you ok?'' She said running up to them.

    ''Yeah, we're ok. '' Sora said looking round to see the girl Goofy had seen running up to them. ''You new here or something?'' She said. ''I guess you could say that.'' Kirsty said with her arms around her head, immitating Sora's relaxed pose. ''Immitater.'' Sora whispered under his breath. Kirsty grinned at him. ''Can I get your name's then?'' The girl said. ''Sorry, we're Sora, Kirsty, Donald and Goofy.'' Goofy said gesturing to everyone as he named them. ''I'm Alex. Nice to meet you.'' Alex said.
     
  9. Princess Snow White I feel such an isomniac.

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    Name: April
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    Base Story: In search of her male friend, Lukas. They were separated when there home was swallowed by darkness and is helping on the Hallow Bastion Restoration Commitee
    Nature: Wiz in martial arts and black magic
    Good guy/Bad guy: good
    Where do u wanna appear: When Sora 1st goes to Hallow Bastion
    Bonus characters: Lukas who appears in the middle of the heartless/noboby invasion of Hallow Bastion

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    http://i212.photobucket.com/albums/cc20/Queeenemma/sleepingninga.jpg
     
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  11. Sorikai Traverse Town Homebody

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    wow theyre perrrrtty lol

    Here's da next chapter:


    Chapter 5
    Welcome to Twilight Town



    ''Hi, uh, you wouldn't be able to tell us where we are, could you, Alex?'' Sora asked, scratching the back of his head awkwardly. ''Sure! This is Twilight Town. This center is called Tram Common. You new here or something?'' Alex said. ''He he, I guess you could say that.'' Kirsty said. ''Well, do you have a place to stay?'' Alex asked. ''Umm, not really. We're not really planning on staying for long.'' Donald said. ''Well, you look like you could use a tour anyway, so, follow me!'' Alex said, walking down the pathway towards a path that lead to a street. Sora, Kirsty, Donald and Goofy shrugged and went after her. They went up the hill into a street that Alex introduced as Market Street. They went up another hill and into a back alley. ''This is where you can crash for a while with me and my friends.'' Alex said. ''Here? In a back alley?'' Sora said. ''Is there a problem with that?'' ''No, just... well. Never mind.'' Sora said awkwardly. ''C'mon, you've stayed in worse places, Sora.'' Kirsty said, patting Sora on the back. ''I've stayed in better places too.'' He moaned. ''Quit complaining, it's not that bad.'' ''Not that good either.'' ''Oh shut up, Sora.'' ''Here we are.'' Alex said, pulling back a curtain and gesturing the others to go inside. They all went in and found themselves in a cosy room that had a sofa where a girl was sat, a boiler that didn't seem to work anymore, where two boys were sat and numerous posters that all said ''welcome to Twilight Town''. ''Hey, Alex.'' The girl that was sat on the sofa said. ''Hi guys, what's up.'' Alex said, waving at everyone. ''Who's that?'' One of the boys sat on the boiler said. He seemed to have a very short temper. ''I found them on the train... well, on the roof.'' Alex explained. ''And you brought them back here, why?'' The boy said. ''They need a place to crash for a while.'' ''Forget it, we've got stuff to do.'' ''Hayner, we finished that homework asinement two days ago!'' The girl sat on the sofa said. '' Just for today?'' Alex said. Hayner thought it over for a while. ''Fine. JUST for today. Then they can get out of here.'' He said, jumping off the boiler and going outside. He stopped beside Sora. ''If you're playing some kind of dirty trick here, I suggest you get out of here now.'' He whispered coldly in his ear. Sora quickly shook his head. Hayner went on his way. ''Sorry about him, he's got a really bad attitude. I'm Olette by the way.'' Olette said. The other boy that was sat on the boiler jumped off and went over to the others. ''I'm Pence. What are your names?'' Pence said. ''This is Sora, Kirsty, Donald and Goofy.'' Alex said gesturing to them as she named them. ''Nice to meet you.'' They all said. Olette and Pence looked at them exitedly. ''Sora, Kirsty, Donald , Goofy. We just met someone who was looking for you.'' Olette said. ''He had his hood up so I couldn't see his face... But he had these big round ears.'' Pence said, doing a circular motion above his head with his fingers. They all tcrossed their arms and thought. Who could that be? ''The king!'' They all said exitedly. ''Where did you see him?'' Sora asked. ''At the station.'' Pence said. ''The station, thanks!'' ''Umm, Alex?'' Kirsty whispered to Alex. ''Yeah?'' ''I think it would be best if you show us the way, before Sora gets to carried away and gets us lost.'' ''Ok, follow me.''
     
  12. Luna561 Traverse Town Homebody

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    This is geting very good.
     
  13. Sorikai Traverse Town Homebody

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    Glad u like it :) Who's ur fav character??
     
  14. Luna561 Traverse Town Homebody

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    Riku is my favortive.
     
  15. Sorikai Traverse Town Homebody

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    would u like 2 meet him?

    Here's da next chapter (I'm on a role now! lol)




    Chapter 6
    The King?



    Alex led Sora and friends out of the back alley and up a steep hill where they found themselves in a train station. There was no one there. ''He's not here...'' Donald said, dissapointed. ''We must have missed him...'' Goofy said. All of a sudden, loads of white creatures appeared and surrounded them. Kirsty summoned her Rainbow Keyblade, Donald took out his staff, Goofy took out his sheild and Alex summoned her two dual Keyblades, Sunlight and Moonlight. Sora was the only one left unnarmed. He was staring at the markings on the creatures' heads. Somehow it looked awfully familiar. ''What are you wating for?!'' Kirsty said, pulling him back to reality. ''N-nothing. It's just, those markings...'' Sora said. ''Think about it later! Come on!'' Donald said, charging at one of the nearby creatures. The creature dodged him and he ended up flat on his face. ''Stand still you little...!'' He yelled chasing after it. The others charged off in different directions. Kirsty swiped one of them, making it vanish like the Heartless used to. ''This kind of brings back memories, doesn't it Sora?'' She said. ''Yeah, feels good to be back on the battlefield!'' Sora said, throwing his Keyblade at a far-off one. Alex, meanwhile, was taking down creature after creature, with smooth, clean moves, twirling the two Keyblades around her, taking down a creature every time. Goofy was using his shield took knock down enemys that were out of reach. It seemed that every time they took down an enemy, more took it's place. ''Come on, enough all ready!'' Sora said, exausted. ''Sora! Behind you!'' Kirsty called over to him as one of the white creatures jumped on top of him. ''Get off me!'' He yelled, flailing his Keyblade about franticaly, failing to hit the enemy on top of him. The white creature, whipped his back with it's sharp arms, causing Sora to crie out in pain. ''Hang on, Key-boy!'' Kirsty called, running over to him. The creature continued to whip Sora on the back, getting faster and more powerful with every attack. Kirsty swiped it and it went sailing off into a nearby wall. ''Thanks.'' Sora muttered, getting up, holding his back. ''Could you, please?'' He said. ''What would you do with out me?'' Kirsty said. ''CURE!'' She said, holding her Keyblade above Sora. A green flower appeared above him. The scars on his back where the creature had whipped him vanished. ''That must of hurt.'' Kirsty said, noticing the holes it had made in his jacket. ''Yeah, I guess so.'' Sora said, feeling around his back to make shure the scars were gone. ''Shall we?'' Kirsty said, holding her Keyblade up to her ear, ready to charge. Sora nodded. They activated their joint attack, Rainbow Of Luck. Kirsty held her Keyblade out to her side and flew upwards. She made a rainbow around a group of nearby enemys. ''Ready!'' She called to Sora. Sora jumped onto the inside of the rainbow, and, with his Keyblade outstreched towards the enemys inside, he started to spin around on it, getting faster and faster until he became a red blur. Kirsty jumped up into the middle of the circle and nose dived into the center of the blur, Keyblade outstreched to the bottom. Her hit hit home and the enemys inside vanished. Sora continued to spin while another lot of enemys came sailing into the Rainbow Circle. ''Sora!'' Kirsty called, hand outstreched towards him. Sora caught hold of her hand and she spun him around in mid air, taking down the other enemys. When they had gone, she slowed him down and let go. They finished the joint attack by standing back-to-back in the center of the Rainbow Circle. They foccused on all the light that they had into a finishing move that made flash of light come out of them. Their power combined, expanded the rainbow, taking down enemys as it went. After a while, the Rainbow dissintegrated and the light faded away, revealing the two exausted Keyblade Bearers in the center. ''Good luck!'' Kirsty said, running off into another group of white creatures where the others were fighting. Sora groaned and went after her. After all the enmys had gone, they all collapsed in a heap, again, back-to-back, as another lot of enemys appeared. ''I can't fight.... anymore.'' Sora said weakly. ''Me neither.'' Kirsty said. ''You know, until you guys came along, I don't think I'd fighted that much in ages.'' Alex said. ''Your saying thats a bad thing?'' Donald said. ''Well we just got up, what do you think WE feel like?'' Goofy said. The creatures charged at them. They all held up their weapons and braced themselves for the worst. All of a sudden, a tiny figure jumped in front of them, taking down the enemys one by one. When they had been defeated, they didn't come back. Sora made his Keyblade vanished and leaned towards the tiny figure. Donald and Goofy jumped on top of him. ''Your Majesty?'' They said exitededly.

    Chapter 7
    The ghost train



    ''Shhhh! You've gotta board the train and leave town! The train knows the way.'' The tiny figure said. If he was the king, he seemed to be behaving a little over cautious. He was wearing a black cloak with the hood up so they couldn't see his face. His ears were sticking up in the hood, making it pretty obvious who he was though. ''Here.'' He said, handing Sora (who had finally managed to get Donald and Goofy off of him) a bag drawn by string. ''What's that?'' Kirsty asked, getting up. ''Dunno. Looks like a purse.'' Sora said. He opened it up to what was inside it. There was munny inside it! ''1.000, 2.000, 3.000....'' Sora counted. ''There's 5.000 munny in here!'' He said. ''Your majesty!'' Donald called as he saw the miniature king running off down the hill. ''The king? Was that really him? Sora said, staring after the small black figure. ''It could've been... Yep, I know it was!'' Goofy said. ''Ok, guys, time out. Who are we talking about here?'' Alex said. ''It's a REALLY long story, Alex. Maybe some other time.'' Kirsty said. ''The king was locked in the Realm of Darkness.'' Sora reminded them. ''But we just saw him.'' Kirsty said. ''And that means, if the Kings here, Rikus here!'' He said exitedly. ''He's gotta be!'' Donald said. ''Well I kinda feel like a fifth wheel here, Kirsty. I'm gonna head home, ok?'' Alex said. ''Ok. Uh... Will we see you again?'' Kirsty said. Alex folded her arms and thought for a moment. ''Maybe.'' She said. Kirsty nodded. ''Ok, then, see ya!'' ''Yeah, see you later! Oh! Could you say goodbye to the others for me?'' ''Sure!'' ''Ok then, bye!'' Kirsty waved her off, then went back to the others. ''I'm gonna go look for Riku. What are you guys gonna do?'' Sora said. ''Gawrsh, Sora. Did you have to ask?'' Goofy said awkwardly. Sora giggled. ''Hey! What's so funny?!'' Donald said. ''Your faces!'' Sora said. Donald and Goofy looked at each other and found their faces were screwed up in a funny way. They both laughed at each other. Kirsty came over to the others. ''Hey, what did I miss?'' She said. ''Nothing. Hey, where's Alex?'' Sora said, looking around for her. ''She went home. She told me to say goodbye to everyone. So... goodbye!'' Kirsty said. Sora smiled at the joke. ''Right then, shall we get going?'' Kirsty said, rubbing her hands together, raring to get going. ''Yeah! To... where again?'' Sora said, with his hands behind his head. Kirsty copied him. ''Why do you have to copy me every time?'' Sora whispered in her ear. Kirsty giggled. ''We've gotta board the train!'' Goofy reminded him. ''Oh yeah!'' Sora said. The rest of them all sighed. When they were in the station, they found they were being followed. ''Hey, Sora?'' Said a voice behind them. It was Hayner and the gang. ''Yeah?'' Sora said, turning around. ''Nothing but...'' ''We came to see you off. it just seemed like something we out to do.'' Pence said. ''Really? Thanks!'' Sora said, surprised at Hayner's sudden change of attitude. ''Sorry I was so cold before. It's a habit.'' Hayner said. ''Don't worry about it.'' Sora said. ''You should hurry and get your tickets.'' Olette said. ''Kirsty, you got munny?'' Sora asked Kirsty, rummaging around in his pockets and finding he had none. Kirsty looked at him in a sarcastic blank look. ''Gee, I dunno Key- boy. Why don't you try the purse filled with 5.000 munny that's in your hand.'' Sora laughed as he realized he was still holding the bag of munny the king had given him. He went over to the ticket booth and asked for four tickets. Olette stared at the bag. ''What is it?'' Donald asked her. Olette rummaged around in her pocket and pulled out a bag that was identical to the one Sora was holding. ''There the same!'' Goofy said. Olette nodded. Sora shrugged and took out 2.000 of the munny and payed for the tickets. ''Hey, where's Alex?'' Kirsty said, noticing that Alex wasn't with them. ''Isn't she with you?'' Pence asked. Kirsty shook her head. Pence and Olette exchanged worried glances. ''She said she was going home.'' Kirsty added. ''Well she didn't come back to the Usual Spot.'' Pence said. ''Could you do us a big favor and see if you find her wherever your going?'' Hayner asked Kirsty. ''Sure! We'll find her.'' She said. ''Ok! I've got the tickets!'' Sora called to them. ''Be right there!'' Kirsty said. They all went up the steps and over to the train. Sora stopped halfway towards the train. ''What's up?'' Kirsty asked him. ''I can't help feeling like we won't see this town again'' He said. Kirsty rolled her eyes. ''Your thinking too much. Of course we will!'' Sora nodded. ''Yeah, your right.'' They met up with the others beside the train. ''Well, see ya.'' Sora said. Hayner and gang looked at him funny. ''Sora? Your sure we haven't met before?'' Hayner said. Sora thought for a moment. ''Positive. Why do you ask?'' Hayner shook his head. ''I dunno.'' Sora smiled. For some reason, his emotions got the best of him, and a tear ran down his cheek. Kirsty noticed his sudden change of attitude. ''what's up?'' She asked him. Sora shook his head and rubbed his eyes. ''Pull it together!'' Hayner said. ''Don't know... where it came from.'' Sora said, scratching the back of his neck awkwardly. ''Right, see ya.'' He said, waving at them and running into the train. Kirsty went in after him. They waved at Hayner and the gang as the door closed. Pence walked along side them as the train started to move.
     
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  18. Sorikai Traverse Town Homebody

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    Welcome aboard!

    Ok, I'll c wot I can do
     
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    Name: kratos

    Weapon/abilitie: a dark sword and he uses the power of darkness. he also has amazing speed.

    Base story: his world was swallowd by darkness but mickey saved him in the dark realm so he joined mickey. his wolrd was twilight town but the power of darkness transported him to a new world.

    Nature:quiet, sarcastic kepps mostly to himself and he likes to annoy sora

    Good bad/bad guy: good guy

    Heartless/Nobodie: na

    Where u wanna appear: when mickey appear in holow bastion

    Bonus character: na
     
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    Welcome aborad! Hope ull b lookin' forward to the third/second visit (cant remember) to Hollow Bastion cuz I sure am! lol

    Chapter 8
    The tower




    When the train had left the station, Donald and Goofy sat on the seats, looking out the window. Sora and Kirsty remained standing. Sora leaned against the train door, looking out the window, still seaming to be acting strangely. He took out the bag of munny and took out a blue orb that he had discovered. He held it up to the sun and it sparkled. ''You know..'' He said. Donald and Goofy jumped to attention. ''I'm sad.'' Sora finished. Kirsty put her hand on his shoulder. ''Come on, cheer up! Twilight Town isn't about to get up and leave.'' She said. ''We'll be back.'' Donald said. ''Yeah, we can visit Hayner and those guys again.'' Goofy said cheerfully. Sora smiled weakly and went back to staring out the window. There was a flash of blinding light outside, making Sora close his eyes for a moment. When he opened them, he found that they were in some kind of paralel universe. Nothing these days seemed to surprise him though. After all, it's not like his life has been normal up to now. ''Looks like we're here.'' Kirsty said, noticing the train was slowing down.

    The train pulled up outside a tower that was decorated from top to bottom with stars and moons. In the garden, they noticed a few chests. The train doors opened and they stepped out, with Sora leading, as usual. They all spread out into different directions to take a look around, leaving Sora by the train. As he turned round to look at it, it vanished. ''He, he. There goes our ride.'' He said, realizing they were stranded. He went over to the others. They all went over to the tower's door, but before they went up the steps, they noticed that there was already someone there. ''Hey there... umm...'' Sora said, trying to choose a way to ask who this person was without saying it rudley. ''Who are you, and why are you just standing there? Can't you see there's a cue!'' Kirsty finished for him, not in the way Sora had wanted to say it at all. ''I've sent some of my lackys inside to see if the master of this here castle is as strong as powerful as they say.'' The person said, ignoring every question Kirsty had asked. ''You see, it don't matter how powerful he is, when he's a Heartless he'll do as I say!'' The stranger said. ''A Heartless?!'' Donald said. They prepared for battle. ''That's right. They're those things that come out of the darkness in folks' hearts. Oh, why am I talking to you punks anyway? Go on, scram, I'm behind schedule as it is!'' The stranger said, waving them away with the back of his hand, not taking his eyes of the crack in the door. ''You outa find somethin' nicer to do.'' Goofy suggested. ''Oh yeah? Says who?'' The stranger said, turning around. ''Oh! It's you!'' ''Pete?!'' Donald and Goofy said at the same time. ''You know him?'' Sora and Kirsty said, also at the same time. ''We sure do. Pete's been causing trouble for ages. His majesty banished him to another dimension a long time ago. I wonder how he escaped.'' Goofy explained. ''Oh, you wanna know how, eh? Malificent BUSTED me out, that's how! Now your world- No, no, no, no. ALL the worlds are gonna belong to yours truly! 'Cause Malificent's gonna help me conquer 'em.'' Pete said proudly. ''Malificent... Huh.'' Sora said. Alll four of them laughed. ''Oh what are you laughin' at? Why, Malificent's power is so great that-'' ''She's toast!'' Sora cut him off. ''W-what d'you mean?'' Donald giggled. ''Sorry, but Malificent can't help you now.'' Goofy said. ''You! So YOUR the ones that did it!'' ''Well we might of had something to do with it.'' Sora said with his hands behind his head (Kirsty mimicked him). Pete growled angrily. ''Heartless squad! Round up!'' Four Heartles appeared in front of them, standing between them and the door. They all summoned their weapons. With one swipe each, they took down the Heartless easily. Pete stared opened mouthed. ''You won't get away with this! No one, and I do mean NO ONE messes with the Mighty Pete!'' ''So, ''Mighty Pete'', who lives in this castle anyway. Sora asked. ''Oh, you don't know, eh. Well it's old Yen Sid.'' Pete said. ''But, he's probably a Heartless now!'' He added proudly. ''Master Yen Sid lives here?!'' Donald said, running up the stairs, pushing past Pete and entering the castle. ''Yen Sid was the King's teacher.'' Goofy explained. ''Wow! Sounds powerful!'' Sora said. ''Yeah, let's check it out!'' Kirsty said, running past Pete as well, soon followed by Sora and Goofy.