Kingdom Hearts: Keys of Trinity(prologue and chapter 01)

Kingdom Hearts: Keys of Trinity

Prologue:
In a world, far, far away, a legendary craftsman created three Keyblades known as the ''Keys of Trinity''.
Many said these Keyblades were superior, many tried to witness the awesome power of the three
Keyblades, but the Keyblades were seperated, and therefore their power was limited. One day, a
mysterious figure managed to wield all three of the Keyblades. The blades were meant for stopping evil.
However, he grew into a terrible tiran, who created the ''Heartless''. Even Raph Shur, wielder of the
powerful Keyblade ''Ultima'', wasn't able to stop him. The world continued to live in darkness. Once he
passed away, the Keyblades vanished, and were never to be found again, however, a boy named Danny
Stuivenberg, who wielded the ''Sleeping Lion'' Keyblade, stepped up and went to stop the Heartless. But
he isn't going alone. He brought Grouch Wicked with him, a close childhood friend. Could they be able to
stop the evil who's lurking in the world? ...

Chapter 01: Two warriors

It was a quiet night. A soft midnight breeze blew through the deserts. A Neoshadow Heartless crossed the desert at high speed. Another Neoshadow was being launched towards it. They both vanished.

''Just try me!'' a guy said.

He swung the Ultima Keyblade, and the Heartless rushed towards him. The guy leaped towards the large group of Heartless. They where slain, one by another.

''Who's next?'' he challenged.
''Raph.'' A man called while walking off a hill.

Raph turned around, and he saw the man grinning, and walking towards him. He went in a battle stance in case the man attacked him as well. The man approached Raph, and stopped at 10 feet distance. He had long, blond hair and a grin on his thin face. On his shoulders rest a thorn cape, which reached to his heels.

''Who are you!'' Raph said.

The grin on the mans face began to grow bigger.

''... I'm Nexus, your equal... soon to become even more powerful then you...''
''Soon? Then what are you!'' Raph yelled.
''Is this your way of trying to ask questions? Proving to be tough? I'm more amused than startled...'' Nexus answered.

Raph lowered Ultima, and asked quietly what he was. Nexus explained that he was the controller of the Heartless
that attacked Raph, and he demanded to attack him. Nexus then explained that he wanted to defeat Raph to grow even stronger. Raph shook, and got into his battle stance again, as Nexus' sharp, iron gloves lighten up. Nexus summoned the powerful Keyblade Fenrir, and closed in at Raph at high speed.

Raph skillfully deflected the crushing blow from the mighty Fenrir, and pushes Nexus off of him. He then approached
Nexus in order to land a few hits, but Nexus blocked them with ease, and leaped high up in the air.

''I expected more of a challenge from the wielder of the Ultima Keyblade...'' Nexus laughed, as he looked up to the sky.

Raph panted as he got on his knees to recover.

''Heh. Tired already? Give me a break...''

Raph closed his eyes. He let out a roar, as he launched himself towards Nexus. Nexus let himself being surprised and took in a huge hit. Raph sliced through Nexus, as he fell down to the ground. He slowly got up, and raised his hand. A great number of Neoshadows appeared out of the sky. Once they landed, they slowly approached Raph. He gasped,
and bounced off everyone that dared to come close. Nexus got up, and he laughed in himself. He then disappeared.

''What the hell?'' Raph said in himself.

Raph was surrounded by hundreds Neoshadows. On a hill close to Raph's location, a guy holding the ''Guardian Soul''
Keyblade saw noticed and witnessed the brawl taking place in the middle of the desert. He saw Raph being pinned
down, and needed help. The figure got up, and leaped in the air. Raph was exhausted, and didn't saw an attack coming
from behind. The Neoshadow was being slain before he could even land a single scratch.

''Who the hell are you?'' Raph asked with clenched teeth.
''Rico,'' he answered. ''Rico Persie...''
''Glad you're here, but I don't need your help. I got it all under control!'' Raph said, when an aura lit up Ultima.

Raph lifted Ultima, and a great shockwave occurred, making all the Heartless vanish. It was quiet all of the sudden. Raph
was exhausted, and had a hard time standing. Rico helped him recover, but Raph claimed he didn't need any help.

''It's okay, I'm feeling fine already. I have to meet someone again...'' He said, and ran away at high speed.

Rico then raised his shoulders, and also ran away, in opposite direction. When running, Raph thought:

''Where is he? I have to meet him again... I have to stop him!''
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Well, what do you think? Please comment, critisize, and rate! :D

 

The... title... lol!

Good one, dude! Really interesting! But just one thing: the title says ''Kingdom Hearts: Keys of Trinity (prologue and chapter 01)

Too bad. Oh well, it doesn't matter that much, keep up!

 

Hmm, I think you need to work on your structure, everything seems a bit.. staggered, like some sentences randomly finish in the middle of lines.

It was too short to get into the story really, but next time you can make it longer, right?

I hope to see you carry this on.

The thread title confused me though, you can't have seperate threads for different chapters; it's against the rules. So when you post the next chapter post it here please. You have to have the entire story in one thread.

Im glad new stories are cropping up in this section. I was getting bored 'cause nobody updates *cries*

 

Yeah, the title is probably a mistake...

 

Yep, the title is an awful mistake.... I'm still gonna put the whole story in this thread.

 

Oh well, doesn't matter too much.

 

Alright, this chapter is twice as long as the previous one, and also twice as good! :D

Chapter 02: Heartless overflowing

The city of Izrah was being attacked by Heartless. The streets where full of them. Danny Stuivenberg, a teenage boy wielding the Kingdom Key was out to clear the streets. The sky turned purple dark, as Danny rushed through the city. He attacked one of the Heartless in the back, but then more came after him. Strongly overpowered by the enormous number, Danny searched for a way out of the street. He bashed all the Shadows out of his way, as he makes his way through the avenue.

''Wherever did these guys come from?'' he panted, as he kept running.

He then arrived at an intersection. Heartless approached him from all four sides. Danny stood ground, as he bounced off as much heartless as he could. He was breaking from exhaust a few minutes later, and sweat dropped down from his forehead. He collapsed, as he saw several Shadow Heartless lunge at him. He closed his eyes, and covered his face with crossed hands, balled into a fist. Suddenly, he heard a clinging sound, and he saw a flash of light through the cover of his eyelids.

''Need some help?'' Grouch said, while swinging the Hero's Crest heroic forth and back.

Grouch reached his hand to Danny, in order to pull him up. With a swift manoeuvre, Grouch sliced another two Shadows behind Danny. Danny ran to the huge crowd, and he slashed through dozens of Heartless.

''pant... pant... there sure are many...'' sighed Grouch, as he followed Danny through the way he created between the Heartless.

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Valeria Monera was walking down the countryside with his friend Trick Memo. Trick was a young boy at the age of 11, but he behaved much older.

''I'm hungry,'' he said, as he grabbed a slice of bread out of his bag.

Izrah was in sight. Valeria looked up in the sky, she saw a purple cloud hanging above the city. She gasped, as she peeked over her shoulder at Trick, who was walking behind her, delightfully eating his sandwich. Trick also noticed the sky.

''Are we gonna fight?'' Trick grinned, appearing the Photon Debugger Keyblade.

Valeria panicked, as she turned around, and she demanded.

''No, You're too young! Stay here, it's safer''

The Star Seeker Keyblade appeared in her hand, as she ran off to the city of Izrah, and Trick stood behind. He put away the Photon Debugger, as he walked in circles, bored. He kicked away a gravel, and complained:

''Stupid Valeria, I'm not to young!''

Approaching Izrah, Valeria already noticed that there was not a soul on the streets. It was quiet. A soft breeze flew through the deserted streets. Valeria walked through Izrah, and she arrived at a street sign. She read it, making her lose attention for the roads. Suddenly, she heard a splashing sound behind her. It sounded like liquid falling on hard ground. She looked behind her, and she saw a Shadow raise out of the ground.

''W-what is that...'' she quietly said.

She never saw a creature like that before, and took three cautious steps backward. At first, the Heartless appeared friendly, but then the Shadow swiftly jumped at her, startling Valeria. She dodged out of the way, and threw the Star Seeker at the creature. It fused with the ground again, making the Star Seeker miss its target. The Heartless cowardly fled towards the intersection. Valeria followed him, and she soon learned of all the action taking place.

At the countryside, Trick was leaning against a tree close by. He was whispering in himself.

''...I'm not too young... I'll prove it!'' he complained.
''I'll prove it!!'' he yelled out, appearing Photon Debugger out of rage, and he rushed toward the city.

All the Heartless began gathering in the centre of Izrah. Danny and Grouch both ran towards the creatures. Numerous Heartless were slain, but the battle wasn't over, not in the least bit. The Shadow Heartless moved in circles around the two heroes. Suddenly, out of the sky, Valeria jumped into the overpopulated gang of Heartless. Light emerged out of the dark mess, and the part of the crowd exploded, and vanished.

''Who is she?'' Danny questioned.
''Is that an angel?'' Grouch blushed.

A Shadow attacked Valeria from behind. With a swift motion, she cut the thing in half. The Heartless drove her further into the circle. Their number was decreased, but there were still too many. Danny, Grouch and Valeria fought off each Shadow that came close, thinking of a way to defeat them.

Trick confidentially ran through the streets of Izrah. He also noticed no one was there on the streets. He suddenly heard the sound of breaking glass. The emotion of confidence suddenly turned into fright. He then realised it would've indeed been better if he'd stayed at the countryside. He stopped running, and went into a battle stance.

''W-who's there!'' he stuttered.

He then heard a sound like something hit a car. Trick turned around, and he also saw a shadow. He merged into the ground, and led him to the centre. Trick didn't hesitate to follow him at once, and ran after the Shadow. When seeing the gigantic brawl going on in the centre, Trick froze. He didn't know what to do, when noticing Valeria fighting for her life, he frowned his eyebrows. He pointed Photon Debugger to the purple sky, and the Keyblade lit up.

The circle of Heartless around Danny, Grouch and Valeria were struck by several bolts of lightning, making their number decrease even more. The Heartless froze for a while, enabling Valeria to notice Trick who still managed to get involved in this mess.

''Trick! I told you to stay out of the city!!'' she yelled, but Trick couldn't hear her.

The Heartless stormed towards him, but Trick fought them off. Trick was pinned down, but Valeria supported him. Valeria and Trick had their backs to each other, while keeping the Heartless off of them.

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Another event took place on the rooftops. A guy wielding the Monochrome Keyblade was also forced to defend himself. He was obviously well skilled, and The Heartless couldn't reach him. The Heartless gave up, and noticed the three other Keyblade wielders down the street. They decided to jump down there and join the massive fight.

The guy looked down from the rooftop. He jumped down there as well to help the three. Once he landed on the street, he had hit the ground so hard that a shock wave occurred, decreasing the Heartless for another bit.

''Another Key wielder?'' Grouched questioned, while asking his name.
''Ru.. ar... Russell!'' he said, while holding off the Heartless as much as he could.

Russell pushed off the Heartless and then followed with a great swing from the brutal Monochrome Keyblade. The Heartless was being launched back, damaging some of the others in process. There didn't seem to come an end to the number of Heartless, and the five Keyblade wielders where driven towards each other. Once again, they where pinned down, holding off every attack.

Everyone was exhausted, while the Heartless didn't feel anything for cancelling the massive onslaught. On the streets, away from the slaughter, four figures were wandering about. They seemed to be looking for something...

 

This is good. After reading both chapters, I'm beginning to like this story you've created. Keep it up.