i can't really understand all that stuff like chasers and the keyblade war so i created in KINGDOM HEARTS II 1/2. I had a friend who reviewed this and like it. this takes place many mounths after kingdom hearts 2. basiclly the organization is back and now somehow they have real hearts. oh yeah, Roxas and Namine are real beings too. there will be returning worlds like radiant garden, agrabah, pride lands, colisum and more. also new worlds like island paridice and a movie world. here is the first chapter of KINGDOM HEARTS II 1/2. hope you enjoy. CH.I: THE ORGANIZATION RETURNS One day on Destiny Island, Sora, Roxas, Kairi, and Namine were on the beach. When Ansem the wise gave his life, a side effect happened to Sora and Kairi. When Namine and Roxas got into Sora and Kairi, a process started that was able to give them real hearts. Eventually, they became real beings. Roxas came back from surfing. “What’s up?” Asked Roxas. Kairi looked real mad at Namine. Sora explained that Namine told him and Kairi what happened in Castle Oblivion. Kairi got jealous that Namine tried to steal Sora. Namine said that she was controlled by Marluxia. “I’ve told you that I was sorry. Please let me make it up to you.” Namine asked Kairi “The only thing that you can do is stay out of my life!” Kairi told her. The argument was quickly ended when King Mickey and Riku barged in. “We have some terrible news!” Riku yelled. “What is it?” They all asked. “Well when we went to Twilight Town, we saw what we believe to be an organization member.” Said the king. “THE ORGANIZATION!!” They all yelled. “But he helped us. He told us that all the members have come back to life. They call themselves Organization XI, but this time they have real hearts; like Roxas and Namine. So now it will be tougher. He had big red hair.” “Axel.” Said Roxas and Sora “That’s right!” Said a strange voice “I know that voice…” Said Sora, “Show yourself, Xemnas!” “In due time key boy.” Said Xemnas. “Then I will have my servant back.” Said a different voice. “Oh no!” Yelled Namine, “It’s Marluxia! Don’t let him get me!’ At that moment Kairi could feel that she was telling the truth. “We’ll meet again, Keyblade masters!” Said Xemnas. “What will we do now?” Asked Kairi. “I’ve already alerted our friends in Twilight Town,” Told the king, “and at Disney Castle. Now we have to go to Radiant Garden to tell Leon and his friends. We’ll take the gummi ship.” An hour later after packing, they started to board. The king demanded that everyone should come along this time. Namine almost got on until Kairi stopped her. “You don’t want me to go do you?” Namine asked Kairi. “No, not that.” Said Kairi, “I heard how you felt when Marluxia came back. I’m sorry for what I said before.” The two girls made up and got on. Everyone put their things away and got ready. Then the king walked with something in his hand. “I almost forgot to give you guys these.” Said Mickey. He gave them all special necklaces. “What are they?” Asked Roxas. “They’re necklaces. But they are special because, they will help you on your mission. Use them right and it will glow. This glow may unlock something special. Now I have a special gift for Kairi and Namine. Hold out your hands.” A long beam of light came from the girls hands. Then two special keyblades popped into their hands. “I was waiting for your birthdays, but now seems like a good time. I made them for you two to help on Sora and Roxas.” Said the king. “Wow! Thanks your majesty!” Said the girls. “One more thing.” Said the king, “You don’t have to call me that anymore.” After a couple of minutes of last minute checks, the ship lifted up and left Destiny Island. “Next stop, Radiant Garden.” Said King Mickey. before i put down the second chapter, donald and goofy are on the gummi ship with everyone else CH.II: RADIENT GARDEN As they got closer to Radiant Garden, they decided to land at Merlin’s house. When they landed, they met up with Yuffie. “Hey Sora!” Said Yuffie excitedly. “Hey Yuffie. This is Riku, Namine, Roxas, and Kairi.” Sora told Yuffie. “Hey, is Kairi your girlfriend?” Teased Yuffie. “Maybe.” He replied “where’s Leon and the gang?” “Checking on Tron. Good news, we finished building the castle. I’ll go show you.” They went to go see it, and then Mickey heard a beep. He looked at his watch and saw Queen Minnie. “Sorry guys. I have to take this.” Mickey told them. “So, what brings you guys over here?” Asked Yuffie. “Well,” Sora explained “the organization is back! And now they’re tougher because now they have real hearts. They call themselves Organization XI. We wanted to make sure all the worlds are okay, so we started here.” “Okay.” Said Yuffie, “I’ll go and tell Leon and the others about your situation. They’re too busy at work right now.” “Sorry gang. I got to go!” said Mickey. “What’s up?” asked Roxas. “Heartless and nobodies are swarming the Disney Castle. I got to go help. I’m also going to stay to make sure nothing else happens. I also want Riku, Donald, and Goofy to go with me. Queen Minnie will bring another ship for us. Sora, Kairi, Namine, Roxas; I want you to leave to other worlds!” “Yes Sir!” said all four of them. They all said goodbye and left to another world. if you have any questions or comments, i will start a new thread called kingdom hearts II 1/2 replies. i'd like to know what you think
i've finnaly got the third chapter done. CHAPTER III: ISLAND PARIDICE, VISIT I The group of four landed on a planet called Island Paradise. It was a beach, covered by a tropical rain forest. “Wonder what we should do here?” asked Sora. “Sora!” yelled a familiar voice to him. “Hey Stitch! What’s up?” Sora asked. Sora saw Stitch walk with a little girl. Stitch started speaking an alien language, but it was gibberish to everyone else. “Hi, I’m Lilo.” Said the little girl. “Hello, I’m Sora. That’s Namine, Roxas, and Kairi. Stitch helped me out a while ago.” “He was missing at times.” Lilo said, “I see you couldn’t understand him. Allow me to translate. He says hi, but he has to go. You see, his real name is experiment 626. For the past three years, we have been going to different worlds to find the other experiments. Now they are all good, and now he has to leave to defend our world and another world that’s around us. He leaves today. Do you want to go and say goodbye?” “Sure.” Sora said. They walked to Lilo’s house. They met her sister Nani, who takes care of her. She told them that her parents died in an accident. Kairi tried to comfort them by saying that you get use to having no parents. They went outside to see the ship. There were two aliens named Jumba and Pleakly. They said their last goodbyes and lifted off. They decided to leave and let Lilo try to feel better. “Don’t worry.” Namine said, “We’ll be back. Be sure to have adventures for you to tell us.” They told her goodbye, and Kairi’s necklace glowed. She obtained a new Keyblade named Hawaiian Promise. And Sora learned fire.
looks cool but i'll read it whean i feel like it meaning it is night time here and i dont want to read that now
thanks......... i think. right now i am writing chapter VI. this was just alittle project to do over the summer.
Awesome story but try putting it in script form also check out 1000 ways to Annoy a Keyblade master written by me.
