Prolougue: the first nobody Xavier opened his eyes and looked around him. he was in a room, in front of three thrones. the roof had collapsed and the walls were crumbling. where am I? Xavier asked himselfwhat is my purpose?. he then looked down and saw what seemed to be a giant key... what is this? the lone nobody asked himself. Suddenly keyblade, savior of worlds, Heartless, Nobodies, Unversed, Vanitas, Master, Terra, Erauqs, keyhole, kingdom hearts, Xeanort, Ventus, Aqua the memories came crashing into him like a train. he looked down at the Keyblade "keyblade..." the silver Keyblade which seemed to glow in his hands "light of a Nobody..." how he knew that name he didn't know. he began to walk away with his newfound weapon when he discovered a final memory the door to light "yeah, that is my purpose". to be continued...
Although you only posted a small prologue it is clear a mysterious and enigmatic story awaits. o: If you could split your writing up into smaller chunks that'd be lovely, especially when you're showing his inner thoughts. A quick run through a spell checker would help too, kay :3 Hope you post chapter one soon.