Mape was in deep thought. He had been on the beach earliar that day, and Sora Kairi and Riku had been talking about leaving the islands! And by raft! Mape himself had helped out with tying the logs together, but had second thoughts about going with them. He knew that a raft wouldn't make it far, so he knew that they wouldn't last long. He fingered at his locket. It was on a white chain, and was in an odd guitar shape. It was white, too. The locket wouldn't open, and wouldn't break either. He had even tried to break it open by throwing off one off the higer cliffs onto a rock, but the locket didn't break. It didn't even get a scratch! While disturbed, he still kept the locket. It was his by inheritance, or so the letter had said. Mape had washed up on the shorline, (shortly after Kairi) and was too taken in by the mayor. He had recieved the locket attatched to a letter from a place called "Hollow Bastion". It said he had inherited it from a second cousin..... That was as far as Mape got. He had fallen out of his bed, and heard the distant rumble of thunder. He had a bad feeling. Worrying about the raft, Sora and the others would go to bring it ashore. Knowing that this wouldn't end well, he headed for the raft, too. He later recalled never making it. Ill explain more of the story in Chapter 1. And Mape is pronounced Mah-pay. The locket, well, you should be able to guess what the symbol is. Ampex out!
Chapter1: Invaders on the Island MApe was confused. He hadn't seen Sora's, Kairi's, or Riku's boats, but Hed checked the raft, and It was still there. He couldn't find Them anywhere. He was starting to find the waves threatening, For they were getting larger by the minute. He had always had a fear of waves, it was his phobeia. He turned to run, when black shadows where rising from the beach. He saw a group of people fleeing from the shadows. "What the hell are these things?" shouted one of them. It tuned out it was Tenar, one of the islanders. He was a jock, and played blitzball with Tidus and Wakka. One of the others was Rasto. He was strange, and always wore the robes of a black mage. He seemed that he was a black mage, as he was blasting the shadows with fire. The next person was unfamilliar, and dreseed in a black cloak with a hood. He was shooting at the monsters with an unfamiliar weapon. The last person was Vashi, Mape's longtime crush. Being to shy to say anything, He has kept his silence for many long years. She was standing behind the others, and was being overwhwlmed by the monsters. Mape, who normely was calm, did the one thing he could think of. He jumped and brought his fists down on one of the cretures' heads. As this happened, there was a flash of white light, and Mape brought down a shining white sword weapon on top of the monster. "What the......a Keyblade?!" exclaimed Mape, as he had recognized the weapon from a story that the mayor had told them. This Keyblade, however was white and wavy edged. It had a keychain on it, in the shape of......Mape's locket. "Ummm Mape, a little help would be nice around now...." stated Vashi, as the Heartless were starting to regroup. He answered this by tossing the Keyblade at the Heartless and willing it back to his hand. But before he could do anything else, a hole opened up underneath everyone, and they all fell in as the monsters grabbed at there chests and took oiut their hearts. Then everything went black. Oh yes, another Organization XIII flik. Ampex out!
I agree Keep it up, I like the concept! I like it becuase nobody likes my concpet on my Nobody OC: Base/Sebax...Iam sad...But you're a great writer so keep up!
Don't give up the story! u gotta keep it up, then people notice it on the posts and more people will view this, then it will be more sucessful! I'm gonna keep writing my story whether its wanted or not :P otherwise all my creative thoughts will go to waste...
