Kingdom Hearts 358/2 Days Xion Returns

This Is My Second Creativity Please Enjoy this... I Dont Think It Has to Relate Anything Much To The Game. I'm Just Exited for The English Version...
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Kingdom Hearts 358/2 Days Xion Returns
My Name Is Xion, I Have Done Terrible Things, It have affected nearly everyone, Someone very familliar has appeared, Forced Me, Tortured Me and Turned Me Against The Organisation... It Feels Like someone is pushing me the cross the line. But Instead I Have Gone Too Far... I Must Do What's Right. This Time Someone's Going to Pay for it. Roxas One of my best Friends I Met in the Organisation Has crossed the line instead and I Met my End. I May have Faded Away, But They Can Laugh for all i care... Cause The Real Xion is Coming Home

Chapter 1: With A Vengance

It Doesn't Work That Way, Destroying the One You Loved, Expecting to Forget it, The Memories ARE Coming Back and I'm one of them. So Roxas Are You Ready To Die? And Fade The Same Way I Did! Or Forgive Yourself for Crossing the Line And Serve Me. Roxas Didn't Have Much of a Choice, He Knew He Killed Her, He Knew It Was Mean't to be this way... Forgiveness is Not Exactly the Answer when not doing a friend a favor. Xion Clearly Spoke "Well? What's It Going To Be?" Roxas Wasn't Very Big On Decisions. Roxas gone with serving Her because He Killed Her On Perpose. It's Roxas Fault, It's His Responsibility. Xion Asks Roxas "What are you waiting For? You Killed Me, Remember?"

Flashback

"Uggghhh My Head Hurts" Roxas Complaining When He Just Had A Headache. Xion was Fading Away and Wanted to tell him something. "No... Xion But Why?" Roxas Spoke Sadly. "The Organisation Created me as a Spare, In Case You Betray Us, but you know now Dont You?" Roxas Still Spoke Sadly "It's All My Fault, I Should've Gone with you, I Should but It Was Too Late" Xion's Legs Started to Freeze. "What?" Roxas Frightened of Xion's Death. "It's Okay, I Will Always Be With You, If They Try To Erase Me From Your Memory, Dont Let Them" Xion Spoke During She's Was Fading Away. "Who's Them Exactly?" Roxas Sadly Questioned Xion. "There Are 3 People Who Forced Me Into This, DIZ, Namine and Riku" Roxas Angrily Spoke "Those 3?! Where Are They?!" Xion Tries To Speak But It's Nearly Too Late, "There In That Mansion In Twilight Town" Xion Strokes Roxas By His Face "One Last Thing" Roxas Dont Want It To Be Late, "What Is It?" Xion Tries To Speak Full But Still Fears that she might be too late... "Roxas I Love You..." Her Hand Falls Roxas Catches It. "Dont Fade From Me" Xion's Body Nearly Consumed Fully By Ice, Roxas Attempts To Save Her by Using Cure, But No Effect has Happened! so He Made one Last Decision, "Xion... If You Can Hear Me... Or Feel Me... Before You Disappear... Just One Thing to Do Now..." Roxas Wasn't Really Focused On Love So He Gave Xion One Last Thing. A Kiss. Roxas Confidently Press His Lips on Xion's and there the Kiss Goes. Xion Now Fully Faded Away... But a Shell or Some sort Was Left Behind as A Memory, A Keepsake or a Promise. Roxas Sadly Tries to endure it "Xion..." A Tear Emerges from Roxas Eye down to his Chin. Roxas Drew 2 Keyblades and Turned the 2 Into Oathkeeper and Oblivion and Runs to The Mansion Crazy For Revenge Of His Fallen Love.

Flashback Ends

Xion Spoke Confidently "You remember now? Roxas Restored His Confidence. "You're Alive Now..." Xion Spoke Annoyed In Fact. "What's Your Decision? Die or Serve Me?" Roxas Took the Serve Her Choice "I'll Go with the Second Choice" Xion Confidently Spoke "Good, Now Come With Me..." Roxas Gave Xion a Reminder "but what about that kiss?" Xion Just Remembered The Part when Her Hand Fell, "Yes and I Saw That..." Roxas Spoke "I Thought you Loved Me!" Again It Jogged her Memory. Xion Turns Back to Roxas "You Remember Everything now?" Roxas Tries To Speak Up "Yes Everything that happened to you" Xion Notices Everything The Happened to Her and The Events Inside the Organsation. "Now I Remember, I Was All Because of Riku, Namine and DIZ" DIZ Laughs and Appears. "Now That isn't quite Nice" Namine Appears "Xion! I Thought You Wanted To Know The Truth!" Riku Appears Annoyed "What About Kairi?!" Roxas Draws 2 Of His Keyblades Oathkeeper and Oblivion. Riku Notices that Roxas has Two. "Two!?" Riku Draws His Soul Eater and the Way to Dawn. Roxas Chuckles "Talk About Power of Darkness and a Keyblade" Riku Attempts To Attack But Foiled By Xion. Riku Glares at Xion "What The? 29 Weapons?! You Have Go To Be Kidding Me..." Xion Equips Most of the Organisations Weapons Even Dual Weilds them If She Wants To. Xigbars Guns, Xaldins Spears But 18 This Time, Vexen's Sheild, Lexaeus Tommahawk, Saix Claymore, Axel's Chakram's, Demyx Sitar, Marluxia's Scythe And Roxas Oathkeeper and Oblivion. Roxas Looks at Xion and Amazed of her new ability. "Heh Screwed..." Xion Chooses Her Choice of Weilding And The Rest Act Like Floating Defence and Offence.

Sorry If This Is A Bad Attempt or Serious Story I Done Please Dont Take It Too Much...

 

Cool story. I expect to see more in the future, it's not everyday you get to see people who are fans of Xion.

 

I quite liked the storyline,but please try to split the story into sentences and paragraphs. I understood what was going on,but it might make it a little easier for the other members lol but other than that,good job

 

This is AWSOME JUST LIKE SORA lol :ff10sora: but really it is awsome