As some of you saw in the spam zone I posted a bio for a KHV halloween party thrown by yours truly, I will post chapters of the story as I finish them. hope you enjoy them (just as a disclaimer since there is drinking in this story, i dont encourage underage drinking for anything more than the purpose than this story, and if your character’s actions dont represent the real you, dont hate me, you volunteered xD) Chapter 1: Introductions It was about 5 O’Clock PM on a perfect night on October 31st, and a great night for a party. Brad was setting up the final touches, there was only three other people there helping set up, Mary, Emzy, and J.D. who had already found his way to the refreshment table. Brad knew people would be walking in soon so he walked towards the entrance, Jeffrey walked inside and Ian was close behind, walking in with Alexandra “Glad you guys made it” Brad said “Just so long as there are some girls here ill stay” Jeffrey said “dont worry, they are here” Brad said laughing a little “whatever man” Jeffrey said as he walked into the lobby and took a seat on one of the couches, his feet on the seat as he leaned back. Ian and Alexandra were talking, back towards the main ballroom they walked, they spoke in secret but it was obvious what they were talking about. Meanwhile in the ballroom, J.D. was talking to Mary “I know that I said I wouldn’t drink, but I changed my mind” “well just so long as you keep yourself under control, you know how bad you will feel later?” “honestly, I don’t need a lecture from you, I can handle myself” J.D. said with a tipsy laugh as he patted Mary on the shoulder and walked past. Mary was angry she wasn’t listened to, but she kept her usual calm disposition and decided to let things run their course. Emzy as assertive watched this happen and walked up to J.D. casually and smiled at him “Hey J.D. whatchya drinking there?” “umm nothing really...” he said knowing something was gonna happen “well in that case you wouldnt mind if I took that would you” she said reaching for his bottle “no, im not done with it yet!” J.D. exclaimed as he attempted to push her away. Emzy slapped him him across the face and J.D. took a step back after the blow “what the hell was that for!?” “for trying to touch me!” she said, with this moment she took the bottle from him, and struck him a sly grin, she had it planned all along, she walked away and dropped the bottle in the garbage as she passed. A couple minutes passed and Maria, Jake, Jenny, Meliea, Matthew and Karri walked in, Jake, being the guy he is paid for a limo to take him and his friends, they all walked in talking to each other in the lobby. Jules drove up in his car, he drove a blue convertible, and he walked in looking around at everyone with a smile on his face. He instantly walked towards a group of people. Brad looked around, seeing that most of the people were there, he noticed Ethan walk in quietly, he seemed sad until he saw Liz walk in, they both started chatting as soon as they saw each other. Rick, being the clueless one didn't realize it wasn't a costume party and came dressed up as Rick Astley, he had the popped collar jacket and everything, he smelled of cologne and he walked up to Maria "hey there pretty lady, Im never gonna give you up, please dont let me down" he said in a playful voice "you had better run aroud away from me, or im gonna hurt you" she said, with a clever comeback trying to use, Rick couldnt think of what to say "your good" he said she laughed a little and walked away. Rick was thinking of other ideas to impress the party goers, the women in particular. He saw that the ballroom had a large stage, an idea popped into his head. Thats all for now... im having a writers block, wow lol rereading this it sounds like a perfect RP xD
My name's JeffREy, not JeffERy. I hate it when people spell it like that >> Also, I lol'd at Fuk? getting *****slapped.
Coincidentally enough, my dad drives limos and I can get them for free. :lolface: I can't wait to see where this goes.
This is fukin' awesome. I can't wait to hear my probably awesome idea. and lol @ bishslap. KEEP IT UP =D
I was a bit confused at first of whether I was Mary or Maria (people have made that mistake waaaayyyy too many times >.<). But other than that, it was pretty darn funny, can't wait to see more xD One thing though, capitalize the start of someones lines! For example: “Dont worry, they are here,” Brad said laughing a little. “Whatever man,” Jeffrey said as he walked into the lobby
Damn, I didn't see that thread, I haven't been that active. This sounds interesting though. The bitch slap was a nice touch. Keep up the good work! ;D
to all people who were not able/didnt see the sign up thread, im going to continue writing storys about members now, seems like so far people like them, so when the next story comes be sure to be on the lookout xD but this halloween one will be long since i have so many people
Is this gonna be like, a raunchy story and we're all gonna pair off? Or is it gonna be like, half of us(or more) get wasted and the DD's get really pissy? Just so many directions this can go and I love it.
i had my reasons >.> i dont dislike/like either of them more and i needed to have at least SOMETHING in my story that wasnt utter crap
.___. A hurrhurr good one. Don't spam this just to keep it alive. There doesn't need to be five different people asking if this will be continued. I have my eye on you guys >|
