Video KH2: We're Crying and Hiding The Feeling

My new Amv, info is in the credits and my video description. Here's the video:

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=sX2pFOZmvO8

Please watch and comment

 

Well, first of all, I thought the footage of Dead Fantasy at the beginning was a bit random. I mean when I looked at the title, I immediately assumed it's going to be about Sora and Roxas. I know the majority of the video is probably about the two but it distracted me so I wasn't sure what you were going to throw at me next.

You have a really good song but I began to lose interest throughout the video. Start strong and finish strong. A common mistake is to have a really good opening but a half-hearted attempt at wrapping it all up. Perhaps some more clips of fighting during the chorus because it gets exciting and so on. It's a interesting song choice and from my point of view, it just begs for action.

Oh, and try not to have such a long ending in your future videos. I thought the whole thing was going to go from 5 minutes but you finished 2 minutes earlier. In your case, finish it with a bang. Put the credits in your description. Get rid of the picture and song at the end. We know it's you who made the video.

>.>

Or alternatively you could use a transparent watermark.

I look forward to seeing what else you'll make.

3.5/5.

 

Nice song and timing but i agree with Darkness Kingdom about the dead fantasy

 

Thank you for the criticism!!! ^^
Sorry for the mistakes, when I redid it I only got one comment and it was to fix the size, nobody told me anything else, so I didn't know what to fix. Yeah, I realize what you mean.

Well it was suposed to be a Roxas and Sora tribute, but I ran out of their clips. I guess I should of downloaded ALL of the clips of Sora, like when he went to Mulan's world and stuff.

Hmm yeah I guess the Dead Fantasy clips were pretty random, but I had just watched an Amv with the song and clips and I finally found the clips. I guess I'm trying to say is that I was pretty excited about using them, that I didn't think about it. I guess the only parts I've should of used was the parts with Kairi and the one when the song deals with 'Angels'.

I really apologize about the sad attempt at my ending, I had lost my computer and I wanted to finish it before school started so I rushed the ending. Even I think the ending sucked, but I didn't think anybody was going to watch it since not many people bothered watching my videos.

I added the picture to give it better quality, since usually Youtube messes it up alot, but we found a bug in it, 'cept makes the video way longer then it should be. Well it's likes this, the longer the picture the better the graphics will be.

Hmm, transparent watermark? Never thought of that, I guess I'll try that!

Thanks for watching my video, and I think the rating is pretty right. I know I would of gave it a 2 or something, but if it got a 3.5 then I'm glad! I hope my next video doesn't disappoint you! ^^