KH The Dark Realm Original Edit Part 2 “Oh we’re here I’ll tell you more, later ‘kay.†They found themselves in an open field devoid of live as far as nobody could tell. But Demyx called out a series of seemingly random phrases which caused two more black coated figures to appear. They and Demyx removed their hoods revealing their faces. Demyx had blond hair and blue eyes from what Nobody could tell. There was a man and a girl the girl had blonde slicked back short hair and the man had relatively long shaggy pink hair. Which was Marluxia was impossible to tell. After what seemed to be an exchange of pleasantries of some kind the three turned to Nobody and the pink haired man who seemed to be their leader stepped forward and said,†I am Marluxia the leader of Organization Thirteen.†“Oh come on Marluxia you and I both know the Organization no longer exists, Sora probably has disposed of all the others by now right?†said Demyx in a lighthearted tone. “I suppose you are correct but the others are not part of our new organization we planned to take it and I still intend to.†Marluxia responded as if it was obvious. “If I may interject--â€, began Nobody when Marluxia turned to him and gave him a glare that froze him mid-sentence. “Pardon but who might you be.†Marluxia asked with mild interest in his tone. “Well I don’t know who or what I am Demyx told me you may be able to explain my situation to meâ€, said Nobody nervously. “Ah yes you are the unknown Demyx informed us of I expected you to be a little more imposingâ€, Marluxia said nonchalantly. “Sorry for not living up to expectations, but I would like you to help me if you are willing and ableâ€, said Nobody. “And what do you need us to do?†asked Marluxia. “I want to know who I am and how I came to be hereâ€, said Nobody in what he hoped was a confident sounding tone. Marluxia was greatly co-operative and told Nobody all about Nobodies and the realm of darkness. He explained that the Nobodies like himself were bound to the dark and lost all their freedom when the key blade master killed them. Nobody understood most of the story but wasn’t told much about his situation, if he was a Nobody like the others, why did he not remember anything. Marluxia simply said it was an anomaly and he was certainly a Nobody like the others. At the end the Faction as Nobody called them decided his name would be X because all organization members’ names were anagrams of their original names with the addition of an X. X was, as such accepted into the Faction. “Marluxia where do you get coats like that?†X inquired. “These are like a symbol of brotherhood you receive on from another memberâ€, Marluxia explained. “So can I have one nowâ€, said X,â€as I am part of your organization now right.†“Yes†Marluxia agreed holding out his hand. X took it and suddenly a dark covered him and formed into a coat. X said,†This is a bit stuffyâ€, as he unzipped it, “Ah much better.†he then followed suit and removed his hood just as he did so he saw the blonde haired girl he remembered, he blinked in disbelief and in her place was the girl from the Faction. Marluxia laughed at X commenting on his unusual fashion statement and introduced the others by their names and titles. “I am Graceful Assassin Marluxia, this is Melodious Nocturne Demyx, and this is the Savage Nymph Larxene.†“Nice to meet you “said X. The others followed suit and with that Marluxia told the others that they would have individual missions to do. They were apparently searching for a door to the light that would allow them to gain access to Kingdom Hearts the heart of all worlds there they could truly exist as whole being instead of the shadows they were forced to live as. Demyx was sent back to the beach head where he was originally looking for the door before X interrupted him. Larxene was sent to the far reaches of the great plain and Marluxia went into the deep mountains. X was assigned to help Demyx by searching the cliffs along the shoreline. As they were incapable of using corridors of the dark they had to travel on foot. X was still bothered by the fact he say that girl whenever he looked at Larxene. As he and Demyx moved along they began talking about what they would do if they got Kingdom Hearts. “So we Nobodies have no hearts, right?†asked X. “That’s right, but once we get Kingdom Hearts the heart of all worlds we can finally become complete.†Demyx answered. “What’s so great about hearts anyways, the whole not feeling anything really doesn’t sound too bad.†“That’s the thing isn’t it we do have hearts just not on our person that’s why we need Kingdom Hearts.†“But, why do you want to be whole, feelings and emotions are just extra to be bothered with.†“I guess you could see it that way, but there are ups to emotions like happiness and those kinds of things, right.†“Well, I think it’s better, you can think clearer without the chains of a hearts emotions.†“Honestly it’s worse this way you remember feelings and emotions from you’re past but, not to experience them can be a bother in itself.†“Then as a Nobody. I’m blessed.†‘I wouldn’t go that far being forced to live as a half inspires this empty feeling and we exist as the most fleeting of shadows I think that it’d be better to have the kind of freedom a heart would give you the freedom of choice.†“Whatever you say I’m in it for the memories.†“Oh yeah, rather opportunistic of you preying on us like some kind of animal.†“Don’t get me wrong I just don’t know if I want a heart it could be problematic but I do want my memories I want to know who this other me was or maybe who they still are. Oh well it’s not my place t choose as a “fleeting shadow†anthat.†“Yeah yeah say what you want either way its good to have extra help whatever the reason.†“That’s good to knowâ€, said X as they arrived at the beach,†this is where we part ways it looks like.†“Yeah see ya later, to Kingdom Hearts right?â€
Good, I really loved the last line. Anyway the only suggestion I have is during that long dialogue between "X" and Demnyx (sp?) you did not put who said what till like that last three lines.
Sorry I meant to go back and do that but I forgot and this edit isn't the final so I am not editing this version anymore.
