Kingdom Hearts II KH Sofa!!!

Yo. I am making a thingy called KH Sofa.
Its starts out as Sora, Donald, Goofy, get off a radomness train and go to a randomness guy...
ITS SUPPOSED TO BE STUPID!

 

I don't like it I can tell its not very scripted or organized and you repeated the same things over and over again. It also seemed like you tried to lip sync by adding unnecessary banter.

So my advice

Script it
Add some music into the background heres a website http://www.bluelaguna.net/
Organization.

 

Actually some parts I wanted to edit but my friends said it was good the way it is...
But The second ep. is WAY better then this one

 

Hm.. I don't think you quite got the point of it. One thing that La Sofa has is the ability to instantly come up with brilliantly random ideas, that ten mintue clip was recorded in three parts, none of which were planned out at all...

And of course, he purposely repeated the same idea multiple times, to simply show that Yen Sid is supposed to be very wise, but yet only knows so little as to repeat himself over and over.. Although I agree with adding background music to it, in Part 1 there was some BGM added, but for somereason that video woudn't upload to Youtube correctly...

 

Did u voice record all of this?

 

If thats the case then in my honest opinion this was a very bad attempt at humor.