Traditional Art KH OC Art. My cousin's characters

I drew this initially for my cousin... but slowly started to develop a story around it... (that''s typical of me. >_>)

Inked in BallPoint Pen

If anyone wants to know the story, it's located below. Also if anyone wants to help me fine tune the story to fit the timeline or to just help. Feel free!



Story

The idea is that this story happens between KH 1 & 2...more or less before CoM. The guy on the right was Approx the "11th" member (right before Marluxia and Larxene joined) and he was charged with investigating something suspicious in another world.

See, the thing was, no one really liked him much... so they sent him on a wild goose chase while they concentrated on gathering intelligence on the whole Sora affair that was going on with the heartless. After all, the presence of Nobodies was only beginning to grow. As they collected data they learned, more or less on the power of Keyblade users. Hexios (working name) kept up to date and managed to find a girl wandering around, left homeless because her world had been destroyed. Through sheer luck (and because she wanted to protect people from heartless) she managed to conjure up a keyblade.

This was a great opportunity for Hex to look good in front of the "snobs" in the Org so he convinced her that the Organization he was in, was dedicated to finding out why this was happened to the worlds. And also made her believe that he was sent to find her because of her power.

Jess (working name again) didn't have anywhere to go or anyone to fall back on so she decided to go with him. (which is why she has an Org insignia on her shirt) The Org was shocked by their good fortune and followed in with the lie that Hex was weaving to further understand the nature of keyblades. Hex was sure he had completely grown to new levels in their eyes but as it seems, there were other plans...

I'm still figuring out "why" they're wanna gt rid of him and all, (like I said, I'm still working on it) but in the end, he runs off with Jess (taking her more as insurance than anything else since they need her) and are thusly, being chased around by the Organization. So, they're sort of like renegades that have left the Org and Hex is stripped of his number and place.

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I'm basing this story off the Final Mix Video on when the Org XIII orders Axel to dispose of Roxas. Saying that he had mercilessly taken down traitors before it would seem possible for there to have been "former" Org members that had been executed/Turned into Dusks... Basically, I really hate FF stories that tamper with Major Original time lines so the end of this story will tie up quite neatly, not intersecting very much with KH2 Major events.

 

Wow, that's so amazing!!! The details and everything is so pretty!

 

I dont know why, but I dont believe you made this. If you did, good job.

 

These are vey good, though there are some tiny flaws( like the girl's eyes) the whole impression of the drawing is very nice.
I think this is lovely, and I would like to hear the story.
And btw, the boy looks a lot like Ichigo from Bleach even the pose.

 

-_- Well I did. If you lived in Canada you can come over and check the original if you want... *fumes* You can find this in my DA account too, along with my WIP coloration of it. The Name's: BurningArtist

You'll be able to tell by the rest of the art that this is mine. >_<

To be fair, I had been watching a lot of Bleach when I drew this but the pose isn't taken from it nor is the face. I drew this when I was in the states visiting my aunt and she doesn't really have any anime in her house. lol I saw this boy's pose in a magazine (well sort of. I made a lot of changes to it) and I sketched it out. Actually, there are flaws with the arm length of it. >_< Not sure I see the flaw in Jess' eyes though...

*squints*

But thank you none the less! I'll post the story up on here but I'm still working on fine tweaking it to match the KHs time lines. I have more research to do so this is the story up to date basically. :)

 

very good, i like it!

 

Is anyone else gettting a manly feel from the girl? :\ [has decided she'll be an /ic/*** and not go into crit. details]

Anyway, it's still very good. I always like this inking style.

 

Yeah, I kind of noticed that to. Only because she is strong built.

 

Yeah... my cousin's a bit of a tomboy. (I really won't tell her that I called her that though. :( )

If you guys want girly though... this is my favorite one. ^^

 

Both these pictures are absolutely gorgeous. The line art is perfect. If you don't mind my asking, what program do you use? Or are you just a regular pencil artist?

 

Wow... I totally lost track of this thread! It's all ballpoint pen and careful, patient inking. ^^ Actually, the first picture is nothing but a scan. ^_^

 

Edited First post. :)

 

Holy wow, I thought I was a good drawer, but this puts me to shame. Also, just to let you know you can put the story in the Creativity Corner. ^.^

 

Oh yeah! Maybe I should ask to move the whole post huh?
What do you think? Oh, and thanks for the comment. ^^