This is my first full length vid, and I could really use some feedback. http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=sfCK9iQIIFY or <embed style="width:400px; height:326px;" id="VideoPlayback" type="application/x-shockwave-flash" src="http://video.google.com/googleplayer.swf?docId=188079425888055100&hl=en" flashvars=""> </embed>
