KH Haiku

To be different, I decided to write a Haiku for this site.

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Grey and Blue background,
Lots of fun and KH too,
Don't annoy Sara.

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I plan to write one about each section, this was just general.

 

XD.

Ah, the magic of Haiku's.

"Don't annoy Sara."

XDDDD

Good job.
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oh my gosh!
thats awesome!
especially the ending
great job!

 

Haha, I like that, especially the ending. XD I've always wanted to write a haiku myself, but I kept forgetting how many syllabyes each one needed...anyhow, great job! :glomp:

 

yea, 17 syllibils (sp?)

5
7
5

or for its big brother the tanka which no one seems to know about it is 31

5
7
5
7
7.

 

Me likes it ^^, so in other words, GJ.

 

thnx chaser, are you feeling less depressed today, I was worried about you.

haiku part 2, unintentional rhyme lol.

The rules eternal
unless updated by MIIIIIIIIISH
Break them and you'll pay.

 

Yes, better, and I like the second part ^^.

 

thnx:

part three:

The glorious staff,
They keep us up and running,
And never quarrel

 

Ooh, nice three part poem! :) XD

 

U really no how to incorperate humor in these poems. Gd job!

 

yay. every time I post I am going to post a new part.

News ever changing,
Xaldin does all of this stuff,
Keeps us up to date.

 

Mmm.. I like the new parts, still GJ.

 

Agreed! They're awesome! XD

 

thnx for all the +ve stuff.

forum news is good,
how to get premmy and stuff,
kind of boring though.