Digital Art Keep your mouth closed and let your eyes listen o.o

Discussion in 'Arts & Graphics' started by GhettoXemnas, Apr 6, 2008.

  1. GhettoXemnas literally dead inside

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    Lulz, I'm supposed to be writing a paper on Graphic Design but I decided to make a sig. CnC pl0x.
     
  2. Sanda Kingdom Keeper

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    Well, there is no doubt that the actual picture part is gorgeous. I love the composition in general, but that text is really distracting for my eyes anyway. The "listen" one is alright, but I have issues with the "let your eyes." I like that effect, but I think it maybe could stand to be less extreme, not as much of a wave. It would flow better that way...or so I think.

    Anyway, the colors are nice & vibrant so that is cool.
    Good luck on your paper.
     
  3. Shiki my waifu is better than yours, thanks

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    I have to agree with Sanda, the wave text needs to either A) Be less extreme or B) Blend in a little better so that it won't be too distracting whenever you use it. Now the other text is nice how it doesn't go all wavy and crazy looking. The picture you used is of good quality as well so there's some points too. Also the colors vibrate together and blend together as well so they aren't really a problem.

    But that is just my opinion...

    Though overall it is pretty good :3