Yesh, I partly mean the member, and I partly mean the charactor in my story who is based off the member <<>> Yeah xD http://i185.photobucket.com/albums/x287/AerithRoses/Kay1.jpg VERSION DOS! http://i185.photobucket.com/albums/x287/AerithRoses/Kay21.jpg I drew this at 11 last night, took me 30 mintues, Bad quality I blame my scanner, sorta shakey lines cause of my bad elbow that Im not suppost to be drawing with << >> But no one needs to know that << >> CnC?
Hmmm I would totally like to direct your attention to here http://www.kh-vids.net/showthread.php?t=12216 =D If your going to say that you like it, at least say WHAT you like about it >_> Same if you dont like it, Say what you dont like about it >_> EDIT: Sofa, instead of deleting your post so it looked like I double posted, you could have just edited it in -_-
Fine then. I like it because of the partterens and stuff on the clothes. I don't like it because of how she's holding the staff.
It be me <3 xD Rosey first of all :glomp: Secondly I love the design of the top ^^ I really do xD Her crown is really pretty too :) I do have one slight criticism though (please don't eat me) but her eyes look blank and empty, though I think that is because of the scanner ^^ so not your fault <3 and the way she is holding the staff looks slightly awkward. However I love it Rosey <3 it is very good xD
Finally, some critque >_> Yeah, I had the eyes shaded in and decently normal looking, but yeah, the scanner likes to mess my drawings up xD Yeah, I had some problems with the staff xD Yay for Kay xD
I only have time to give cnc to one drawing, the time down here is l i m i t e d! I'll try my best to tell you what you wish to know, Rosey. :3 First of all, the main problem with the composition would be the lack of shape, right now her body looks very stiff, very tense and very flat. And to make it more realistic hight wise you should add her feet, or add more lenght to the skirt - for some reason she seemed too short for me? I can see a hint of guide lines/orbs, keep that up! :D I bet you noticed it's easier to keep track of what it is you're doing when you use them, right? (or it may just be me.. meh) Just keep studying the different tricks that tutorials contains (maybe you've found one I don't know of? All tuts are useful). I know this was only a 30 minute job and with a damaged elbow, but just keep in mind it's suggestions until it sticks, eventually they'll just come naturally as you draw. :> About her hair, the strands of hair are... too few, maybe - with so few lines it gives an impression of thick hair, and less smooth - almost as if it's dirty, you know? My advice would be to be more daring with your lines when you draw hair, it can be very playful both in comics and in real life. Some parts will stay highlighted, others shadowed, this will add the "waves" of the hair - the sharper you make them the more curly they will become. The eyes doesn't have pupils as far as I can see, that's why she looks so.. empty for emotions. Is she calm, is she happy, angry, worried, what? You probably know that eyes help to show a character's emotion - these are just hard to figure out how she is. IMO, she reminded me of some sort of a spirit, one shrowded in mystery. It can be used to your advantage, though you'll probably need more shading on the drawing. Was it useful? >>;;
Coco, CtR thanks for the critque :3333333 So I tried to us the critique to add on <_> http://i185.photobucket.com/albums/x287/AerithRoses/Kay21.jpg <--- Version. Cnc?
thats really good and im no artist(or spellist or grammerist) but her sleeves are kinda uneven arent they? and like i said im not artist so dont take my advice TOO seriously (specially since its not that helpful :/):locked2: edit: omg nevermind im such an idiot i forgot somehow that the arm was in a differnt angle than the other so of course the sleeve would look shorter...:/ sorry
I know xD After I finished I was like "HALLIJUAH" Cause that was the first time I think I got eyes to look normal xD Lawl. Thanks xD
Rosey I have to say, this version was a million times better than the first (which I Loved <3) Having the proper appearance of her eyes really brings her face to life and I love how she looks faintly amused at something (she does to me anyway). The hand holding the staff is drawn much better this time too. The other main thing I Love about this version is the hair, it has a fluffier more rock chic about it. I can't find a flaw with this one Rosey, good work <3
The face need a bit more improvement; try drawing a circle, then draw like a cross, on the circle. This help you on how to shape the face. Almost like this. (of course It doesnt need to be so fat like mine, the circle can be more narrow,or round, any shape, as long as its a nice shape. The one I did was pretty much a doodle ) Also the body needs help; Easiest way to do a body is to draw a stick person, or you can try drawing a shape,as a triangle. (I hope you understand me there) The right hand looks good, the left hand is pretty, 'Ehhh'. Again making a hand better ; Just try to copy your hand, (which I do pretty much) Or, try stick hands, then fill them out. Theres many ways. I don't think you want me to post like a whole tutorial here. Hope that helps, don't flame me for my "you-make-no-sense" Overall : 6.4
She looks much more alive this time, as mentioned. :3 Though she still looks sort of flat outfit wise, it lacks shadows shaping her legs, upper body and arms. You get my point, the cnc's given are very wise to pay attention to later on. :> The character is still interesting, it would be wonderful to see some more of her. :D
Rosey I like the hair. the first one I've seen. xD But the only thing I see wrong with the secong one is the hand. but no many people are good at hands. So yeah.. xD Awesome job!
