Kairi's choice (chapter twelve)

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Did you like the story Kairi's Choice

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  1. dancecat120 Gummi Ship Junkie

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    This is sadly the last chapter. What will Roxas tell Kairi? What will she do? Who will she choose? Only reading the next chapter will tell

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    Chapter Twelve



    On the Beach

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    Recap:


    Kairi heard a sound and quickly looked up. Roxas was stepping out of his corridor of darkness. She looked up at him. “Roxas, we need to talk.” She was serious.

    He looked up serious too. “I know, I understand. I haven’t been completely honest with you.”



    End of Recap

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    “Roxas, I think I know.” She looked up at him.

    “Well, I hope you will forgive.” He looked sad and continued speaking. It seemed as though his mind was somewhere else. “The organization wanted me to make you well um fall in love with me. Then they would get you to come to the castle and tie you up. They would’ve made Sora give something up to save you.” He was quite. He really did look sad. They just stood there, looking at each other in silence.

    “Wait, you mean you never really liked me? You kissed me! It was all part of some evil plan!” Kairi was annoyed.

    “Yeah, it was. At first at least. After I got to know you, I liked you. I really did want to kiss you!”

    Kairi thought back to yesterday.

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    Flashback


    Roxas was quite for a bit, still smiling. “I, I like you Kairi.”

    Kairi was a bit freaked out. “Wow. I don’t get it; I thought you can’t like me. No offense of anything but don’t you not feel emotions? Don’t you not have a heart?”

    “Yeah, I don’t have a heart. But that doesn’t mean that I can’t like you Kairi.” Roxas said sounding a bit sad.

    “I’m sorry but do you really like me? Or is this just some plan?”

    “I really do like you Kairi; I would never want to hurt you.” Roxas said stroking her hair.


    End of Flashback

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    “You lied to me!”

    “That was before I really liked you. You have to understand! I didn’t let you come back with me this morning so they wouldn’t capture you!”

    Silence.

    They were both quiet. Suddenly they heard something coming from the nearby bushes. “Ha, Kairi we told you so!” Sora and Riku laughed.

    “Wow. Maybe you were right and he was trying to hurt me. But he really didn’t let me come back. I guess I don’t care if his intentions in the beginning were bad. Roxas, will you excuse me for a bit? I need to talk to Sora and Riku.”

    Kairi, Sora, and Riku went to behind a few bushes. “Great job eavesdropping.” She said sarcastically. She looked mad at them. They ran, quickly. “Yeah you better run!” She yelled at them.

    She went back to the beach and sat down next to Roxas. “I really am sorry Kairi.”

    She smiled as he put his arm around her. “Yeah, I know. But it’s okay, I forgive you.” He smiled. She smiled. And slowly then inched towards each other, and kissed. They heard snickering from the bushes. Neither looked up, they didn’t care.


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    Okay this really is the end! Hope you liked it. Please vote on the poll and comment :D

    If you have any questions about the story you can comment or private mail me

    THIS IS THE END
     
  2. Axel's#1fangirl Kingdom Keeper

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    this is the....end? :(

    Pfft, yea right....

    what about the organization?

    First post = PAGE PWN!
     
  3. dancecat120 Gummi Ship Junkie

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    it really is the end

    who cares about the organization

    *ducks to avoid being hit by millions of rocks*

    I might have an afterword though
     
  4. Azure Flame Banned

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    Aww man! I was hoping she would choose Sora. :(
    Oh well! *sighs* Anyways, it was a great story. You should make another one!
     
  5. dancecat120 Gummi Ship Junkie

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    Thanks

    I don't think another story is on the way for a while

    sorry
     
  6. JellyBeing ALL. THE. BUTTS.

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    Self: End...Darn!
    ::kicks ground::
    Self: Now what am I going to use as an excuse not to write lol.
    ::makes these faces-->:rolleyes: :confused: ::

    Anyway...Good Job! ::claps::
     
  7. dancecat120 Gummi Ship Junkie

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    thank you

    you will find an excuse :rolleyes:
     
  8. Azure Flame Banned

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    Oh yeah! Well I got first vote! POLL PWN! :p
     
  9. dancecat120 Gummi Ship Junkie

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    um what is 'pwn'
     
  10. Azure Flame Banned

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    I have no idea! :D
     
  11. dancecat120 Gummi Ship Junkie

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    :D that's a very good answer :D
     
  12. JellyBeing ALL. THE. BUTTS.

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    My best guess your using "pwn" as in poon...well thats how i'd spell it lol as to..."own"
     
  13. dancecat120 Gummi Ship Junkie

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    lol

    if so they don't own the thread or poll

    kh vids does :D