Kairi's Choice (Chapter Six)

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What should happen between Kairi and Roxas?

  1. Kiss!!!!!!

    35.3%
  2. She should KILL HIM!!!

    8.8%
  3. She should be confused and want to talk with him

    32.4%
  4. Fight!

    5.9%
  5. Hug?

    11.8%
  6. I.DONT.CARE.

    5.9%
  1. dancecat120 Gummi Ship Junkie

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    Okay, for some reason I don't think many people saw chapter five so here's the link:

    http://www.kh-vids.net/showthread.php?p=197459&mode=linear#post197459

    In chapter Six, we get to see some thing from Sora's view. What will he see? How will he react? Only reading the next chapter will tell :)

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    Chapter Six


    Still on the beach


    Kairi noticed that it was getting late. She turned and went back to her room. Sora and Riku stayed for a bit.

    “Riku, why do they want Kairi? They can’t love, they don’t have hearts! They have to be up to something!” Sora said.

    “Sora, I am going to let you watch them. I’ll be near Kairi to protect her. Have your key blade ready.” Riku warned him. He slowly turned and went in the direction of Kairi’s room.

    Sora went off to behind a nearby bush and waited.


    On the beach- Sora’s bush


    He was starting to get tired but he knew that he had to stay and watch the organization members. After about an hour of waiting, Saix returned.

    “I put the moon up early to night to get rid of Kairi.” Saix grinned.

    “Nice.” Axel started. “But we need a plan!”

    They all thought for a while until Roxas finally spoke. “Okay I have a plan.”

    Demyx laughed. “Ha, you have a working plan? I gotta hear this!”

    “Okay, first Kairi falls in love, with me.” Roxas smiled.

    “Wait.” Demyx started. “Why do you get her?”

    “One, no interrupting the genius at work.” Roxas continued. Axel, Demyx, and Saix, broke out into laughing.

    “After she is in love with me, I say that I have to go.”

    “But I shall ask her to come and visit me.”

    “Once she is there, we tie her up and hold her hostage and demand Sora to um erg give up some thing? Okay I don’t know what we demand from him but some one else can think of that.” Roxas smiled.

    At hearing this Sora gasped. I have to save Kairi. But how?

    Saix smiled. “Great thinking lover boy.” Roxas glared at him. Saix continued to talk. “You just go make her fall in love with you while we come up with the rest of the plan.”

    Roxas smiled and started towards Kairi’s Room.

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    Okay that was chapter six. Sorry it was so short. I had to break it off there from reasons that you will find out later :)

    Please comment and vote on the poll :D :D
     
  2. khalidroxesnaruto Destiny Islands Resident

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    NICE!LOLOLOL Man this chapter was kinda halirious!Roxes making kairi fall in love with him,lol.Well rock on with the story!:D :cool:
     
  3. Fruity~ Hollow Bastion Committee

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    Nice but a cruel plan. It will hurt Kairi's feelings if he just leave her like this. But still, nice story. Keep it up.
     
  4. dancecat120 Gummi Ship Junkie

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    Thanks :D

    and about the next chapter.... I need to figure out what happens next!

    expect the next chapter in an hour or two

    You will have to see what the organization does in the next chapter!

    thank you :D
     
  5. BlackSun Moogle Assistant

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    I don't know if i should think of this story as a comedy or something else, but its cracking me up LOL.

    And what time frame is Kairi's Choice set in?

    Don't stop this is really good!!!
     
  6. dancecat120 Gummi Ship Junkie

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    At first is was a love story (I think) but every chapter changes everything! It can be funny though :D
     
  7. Quiet Elegy This is the death of beauty.

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    for being new at this you do a good job of catching the reader intrest with all the twists to the story :D thats why its interesting
     
  8. dancecat120 Gummi Ship Junkie

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    Thanks

    I really just write and hope that it shall work out. I really don't know where the story is going or what the end will but so I am just as confused as the readers :D
     
  9. dancecat120 Gummi Ship Junkie

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    I am just starting to write the next chapter now. This chapter will be much longer and I have other things I have to do before I can finish it so it might not be up for a while :)
     
  10. JellyBeing ALL. THE. BUTTS.

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    *gasp* Oh... I feel bad for Kairi. If only she knew their true intentions.
    Self: ::Walks up to Roxas::
    Roxas: Huh?
    Self: ::smacks Roxas::