Kairi's Choice (chapter nine)

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What should Riku and Sora do?

  1. kill him KILL HIM

    5.3%
  2. kill her KILL HER

    5.3%
  3. KILL THEM BOTH

    0 vote(s)
    0.0%
  4. run away

    15.8%
  5. tell her about the plan

    36.8%
  6. get mad and ignore her

    10.5%
  7. be happy for her

    15.8%
  8. I.DONT.CARE.

    10.5%
  1. dancecat120 Gummi Ship Junkie

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    Chapter nine is up. Roxas and Kairi are alone on the beach... I wonder what will happen. Only reading the next chapter will tell.

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    Chapter Nine



    Kairi’s Room


    Kairi was woken up around seven by a light taping on her door. She was slightly annoyed. She got out of bed and saw Roxas standing out side of her door. “Can you wait a few minutes?” She was less annoyed when she saw him. She brushed her hair and put on her pink dress. After tidying up her room a bit she opened her door.

    “Hey Kairi!” He said excitedly. He was way too excited for this early in the morning. He hugged her. “Do you want to go down to the beach?”

    “Sure!” She started out the door. Roxas lightly griped her hand. Kairi felt a little uneasy, she did like Roxas so she didn’t pull away. She looked up at Roxas, he was blushing. Kairi felt her cheeks heat up a little.

    The Beach

    “I got you up early so that we could enjoy the sunrise.” Kairi looked up at the sky. It was beautiful. The sky was mostly a light pink. The orange sun was only slightly visible and hardly up yet. The clouds in the sky were a slightly darker pink. They looked amazingly fluffy and soft.

    Roxas smiled at her. They sat down on beach. “So Kairi, did you have a good sleep?” Roxas was caring. He was cute. Kairi decided that she definitely liked him better than Sora and Riku.

    “Yeah, I slept well, that was until you woke me up.” She was smiling not mad.

    He laughed. “Yeah, sorry about that. I just wanted to watch the sun rise with you. It is so beautiful, just like you are.” He smiled and put his arm around her.

    “Thanks, that was really sweet.” Yeah, he was sweet.

    “Kairi, you’re blushing.” He laughed. Her cheeks did feel warm.

    “And you’re not blushing?”

    He laughed and looked up at her. “The sun is almost up. It is just so great. But then again, next to you it’s nothing.” He smiled.

    Kairi was looking at him smiling. Wow, that was really cheesy. But it was sweet. Consumed in her thoughts, she didn’t even realize that Roxas was inching closer to her. She looked up.

    Oh.
    My.
    Gosh.
    He is about to kiss me. Suddenly she was worried and confused.

    What should I do?

    Should I turn away?

    Should I kiss him?

    Should I get up and leave?

    Well I do like him.

    He is nice.

    He is cute.

    He seems much more mature that Sora or Riku.

    She was still looking at him. She really did like him. She had come to her decision, she would kiss him. She inched closer to him as well. Ever so slowly, they got closer and closer to each other. There was no more room left between them.

    It was too late.

    She could no longer turn back.

    Their lips touched lightly against each others. Suddenly, Kairi heard a gasp. She looked up, Sora and Riku were standing right there.

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    Hope you liked it! Okay when I just checked the poll people wanted her to pull away. Sadly when I wrote the chapter people wanted her to kiss him. Because I didn't want to redo the chapter, I just kept it as was...sorry

    please comment and vote on the poll :D
     
  2. Azure Flame Banned

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    OMFG!!!! :eek: *blinks twice* :eek: *rubs eyes* :eek:
    UH-OH! They are in trouble!!! :rolleyes:

    Never saw it comin'! Never! Good job though!
     
  3. dancecat120 Gummi Ship Junkie

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    never saw what coming... the kiss or sora and riku walking in on them

    thanks :)
     
  4. dancecat120 Gummi Ship Junkie

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    thanks...by the way good job wanting Sora and Riku to kill Roxas

    (public poll :) )
     
  5. JellyBeing ALL. THE. BUTTS.

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    Oooooo...she got caught! No fun without a little risk :p Loves it!
     
  6. dancecat120 Gummi Ship Junkie

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    Yes she was caught

    thanks

    we shall see what they do in the next chapter
     
  7. DiZ The Wandering Soul Merlin's Housekeeper

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    I noticed the poll on the front page, decided to check this out...


    I'm in awe, this is completely awesome beyond all recognition...you're doing a awesome job


    I may be new here, and I may not have read many of the other stories around the forums, but I'm keeping my eye on this one, I like it :)
     
  8. dancecat120 Gummi Ship Junkie

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    Thanks

    If you like think my story is awesome you would be amazed with all of the other writers on here
     
  9. khalidroxesnaruto Destiny Islands Resident

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    Never Saw That Coming!

    O man never so that coming never.But it was cool.My fave charecter is roxes.its nice to see him get a little attention for once!:D :) :o :cool: :eek: :rolleyes:
     
  10. dancecat120 Gummi Ship Junkie

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    I would've thought someone would seen it coming with the last chapter them telling him to...
     
  11. lilaznfreak Moogle Assistant

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    lols. yeah kairi has it oging for her lolz. this was good i liked it!!^^ keep it upXD
     
  12. dancecat120 Gummi Ship Junkie

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    thank you :D

    chapter ten will be up in an hour
     
  13. ThunderOfLarxene Gummi Ship Junkie

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    ooo cant wait for the next one, ooooooooo :D :D :D
     
  14. dancecat120 Gummi Ship Junkie

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    It's out now!

    people please vote on the poll, read, and comment :)