Okay, chapter four is out. Sadly, it will be the last chapter :( . Kairi has made up her mind. Who will she choose? Only reading the next chapter with tell ;) . ~~~~ Chapter Four: Kairi was still in her room. She had cooled off since the latest talk. She was trying to think of who to choose. Still she had no idea. She decided to take a walk. She was just walking along the beach, thinking. The sun was just starting to set. Light pinks and oranges filled the sky. No! Kairi thought. I need to pick. She tried to decide. She decided to say a plus for each one until she could no longer think of a good thing for one of them. Well, Sora is my age, Riku is less immature. Sora is the Key Blade master, Riku was on the dark side. Okay they are both very, very cute, no need to go there. ;) Sora is sweeter, Riku is um stronger? No Riku is, um no. Oh. My. Gosh. Kairi stopped walking. She had come to her decision. She took a deep breath and started walking to go find Sora. --- Sora was already in his room. She lightly tapped on his door. “Sora, it’s me, Kairi. Can I please come in?” Sora came to open the door. He smiled and opened the door. Then he sat down on his bed. She sat down next to him. He lifted his arm and put it around her shoulder, she didn’t squirm. “So, do you want to talk?” He asked sweetly. Oh gosh. Kairi thought. He is so sweet. “Sora, I was thinking for a while and I came to a decision.” Sora took his arm off of her. Kairi shook her head and smiled. She gently put his arm back on. “I’ve picked you Sora.” Sora looked up and smiled. “Really?” He continued to smile and started inching towards her. Just then Riku walked in he saw them and had a shocked look on his face. “Kairi, I see you’ve made up you mind.” Kairi got up and smiled. She walked up to him and kissed him on the check. “Sorry Riku, I’ve picked Sora. That is all you are getting, ever.” She pushed him out the door and locked it. She sat back down next to Sora. “So, where were we Sora?” Sora smiled again. He inched towards her. Closer, and closer, and closer and finally, their lips meet, every thing went black. --- So many thoughts raced through her head. Did I pass out? She slowly opened her eyes. She was in her room. The sun was just starting to set. Wait, that was a dream? She started to think about her dream. Oh gosh, I was a huge flirt. That dream was so unrealistic! She knew that what ever she had thought in her dream was wrong. Oh gosh, back to square one. ~~~~ Hehe, Did I fool anyone? Okay it wasn't the last chapter. There are still many chapters to go :) . Hope you liked it! Please comment and vote on the poll :D
*picks jaw up off floor* Didn't see that one coming! You're definatly getting better at this! Good way to cover up all the times they went out of character! Good use of cliffhanger too! I definatly can't wait for more!
I try to suprise the readers :D The next chapter will not be in the makings for a while because I need to see what happens with the poll
Just when everyone thinks they understand who's going to get her and what shall happen next. I make one wonder!
(growls) You little...... (laughs) You had me so duped! Well, your spelling is certainly getting better, i didn't find ANY errors. Keep it up.
I'm not going to lie. You got me. xD Though During the whole kiss scene I was going "Wait a minute. Wait a minute!" but then- BAM! You got me. Ain't I a sucker? That was very very cute and now that I know what it was building up to- fit quite perfectly... But wait? Is it over or is she reall going to have to chose? O.o
I was thinking that just this chapter was a dream. But the way people are commenting they think that the whole story never happened! I think that it was just the last chapter because chapter 5 starts off right where she was. Yes she still will have to chose
Hahaha loves it! Good to have a shocker once in awhile. Keep up the good work. In my opinion your writing is getting better with each chapter!
