Chapter is up! In this chapter Sora, Riku, and Kairi talk. What will happen? Only reading this chapter will tell. The next few chapters will be short. I am going to attempt to finish Kairi's Choice tonight. ~~~~ Chapter Eleven On the Beach No one talked. They just stood there. Sora and Riku looked confused. Roxas and Kairi had stood up but were no longer holding hands or even touching. Kairi was scared. What are they going to do? By now the sun was up. Today was a nice day, the blue skies with light, white, fluffy, clouds. Too bad none of them would be able to enjoy it. After a long time of standing and staring, Roxas decided to talk. “I um erg need to go back to the Organization before they worry about me being gone. Come visit me sometime Kairi.†He started to turn around. “Yeah you better go!†Sora shouted. “Wait Roxas, maybe I would like to come with you now.†Kairi said. “No, Kairi, don’t go!†Sora and Riku shouted at the same time. “Well I really do have to get back.†Roxas said. “Bye Kairi.†He smiled at her and created a corridor of darkness. “Kairi, don’t listen to him! Don’t visit him. It’s all part of a plot.†Riku said. “You are just jealous that I fell for Roxas and not either of you.†Kairi said. She was mad at them. She had no idea what do to. “No! Okay I might be a bit jealous but you can’t trust him! I over heard him talking to the organization about his plan to make you fall in love with him and then kidnap you. They would make me do something to get you back.†Sora said. He looked sad. “Do you really expect me to believe that garbage? He is so nice to me. He is romantic too and unlike you guys, he isn’t immature.†Kairi said. She was annoyed with them. “Kairi, you are forgetting something. Roxas is part of me. I can feel him. I can feel that he is up to no good!†Sora said. He sounded as if he was begging. “I don’t know if I can trust you. I want to but I can't. I want to talk to Roxas.†Kairi was sad and confused. “Don’t go see him, let him come to you. Make him come here. See if he really cares.†Riku said. “I guess I’ll wait for him here. You guys, please don’t stay. I want to talk to him, alone.†Kairi said. When she said alone she looked up at them. They carefully stood up and ran away. Kairi sat on the beach waiting, hoping for Roxas to come. --- Still on the Beach, two hours later Kairi heard a sound and quickly looked up. Roxas was stepping out of his corridor of darkness. She looked up at him. “Roxas, we need to talk.†She was serious. He looked up serious too. “I know, I understand. I haven’ been completely honest with you.†~~~ Dadada Hope you liked it! Please comment and vote on the poll :D
lol, thanks only two more chapters to go or I could make chapter 12 really long and finish it up then....
Oh come on! The other cliffhangers were good but now you're just being mean! :( :( Still, it is a good story. Keep up the good work! Please!
What you should do is make two more chapters and at the end of chapter 12 have a poll to allow the readers to choose who she picks. *Shouts SORA!!!! in his head* I don't know about you but that's what I would do!
I would do that but I already know the ending. I let the readers decide a lot but I can't let them choose the end result :D
thanks I am done with the last chapter!!!! but just I think I will wait a while to put it up *evil smile*
Oooooo.... Loves it! Building up drama hehehe I <3 drama. Self: I'll wait for that last chapter... hehe drama! ::laughs evily:: Self: Muwahahahahahaaaaaa! ::cough:: Self: Ouchie!