Kairi's Choice (chapter eight)

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What should Kairi do when Roxas tries to kiss her?

  1. kill him KILL HIM

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  2. kiss him back ;)

    31.3%
  3. push him away

    50.0%
  4. ask for more

    6.3%
  5. I.DONT.CARE.

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  1. dancecat120 Gummi Ship Junkie

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    Yay, chapter eight is up. In this chapter we get to see things from Roxas's point of view. What will he see? What will the rest of the organization think? Only reading the next chapter will tell:

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    Chapter Eight



    The Castle that Never Was


    Axel stepped out of the corridor first. “Roxas, stay here. I’ll go tell everyone that you are back.†Axel ran off in search of other organization members.

    Roxas sighed. He knew that the organization did things that he couldn’t know about. Any time he asked anyone they would just laugh and say ‘oh I’ll tell you when you’re older’. They acted like he was just a little kid.

    He was bored. He looked down for a second. Oh, I’m not wearing my organization coat. I guess I should go change. What is the worst thing that could happen?

    Just to be safe he avoided going through any rooms. He was so close to his room and then he saw what obviously Axel didn’t want his eyes to see. He understood why he was to stay in his place.

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    Axel was in his room talking to Demyx. “Demyx, I just don’t get it. I like him but he likes Kairi. He just doesn’t get it!â€

    Demyx hugged him. “It’s okay Axel. I still like you.†He smiled.

    Axel was smiling too suddenly, a lot. Roxas gasped and ran away.

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    Roxas’s Room


    Roxas changed into his organization coat. He decided to stay in his room until he was told to come out. He didn’t want to see anything else like that again. He was just trying to think.

    After sitting there for what seemed like for ever, he heard and announcement over the intercom:

    Everyone, Roxas has returned. Please report to the basement for a meeting.

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    The Basement


    Roxas left his room and headed for the basement. On his way down he saw Demyx. “Roxas, sorry you had to see that earlier.†Demyx said.

    “Whatever, it’s cool. And keep me liking Kairi on the low down, please.†Demyx smiled and nodded.

    “Every one may I please have your attention?†Xemnas started. “Roxas has come up with a plan to bring down Sora. He is making Kairi fall in love with him, then kidnapping her and making Sora give something up to get her back. Roxas what happened while you were talking with her?â€

    Roxas stood up. “Well I talked to her for a while and made it clear that I really did like her and this wasn’t part of some plot.†Every one in the room smiled and started to laugh. “Then she wanted to go to sleep so I hugged her and left.â€

    Every one laughed. Larxene wanted to make fun of him more. “You guys keep forgetting that Roxas is only 15. A hug means a lot for kids at that age.†Every one continued laughing. Roxas was mad. He hated being treated like a little kid!

    Xemnas decided to continue on the meeting. “Okay you guys, it’s time to stop making fun of Roxas. Roxas, next time you have to do more. Just a hug doesn’t mean anything. You have to kiss her!â€

    Roxas stopped breathing and looked at Axel. He liked her but he was way too embarrassed around her to kiss her! Maybe if he didn’t like her it would be easier. It really didn’t matter because he did like her. “I have to what?â€

    Saix talked now, he was a bit annoyed. “Kiss her; you know your lips touch hers. It’s really no big deal.â€

    Xemnas started to talk again. “Okay meeting over. Every one leave, except for Roxas and Axel.†Every one got up and left. “Axel, I want you to talk to Roxas about this.†He got up and left as well.

    “So, Roxas are you okay.†Axel asked.

    “Yeah, I guess. It’s just that I actually do like her and would be terrified to kiss her. What if she rejects me?â€

    “Roxas, stop worrying so much. She won’t reject you! Just make it romantic for her. You will be just fine.â€

    “Yeah I gues.†Axel got up to leave and patted Roxas on the back. Roxas sat there with his head in his hands and sighed.


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    Hoped you liked the chapter! Please comment and vote on the poll!
     
  2. Azure Flame Banned

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    WTF!!!!:eek:
    Other than that, and the fact that it's a little short, it good.
     
  3. Axel's#1fangirl Kingdom Keeper

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    really good! :D *waits for more*
     
  4. dancecat120 Gummi Ship Junkie

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    yeah that was just to throw a twist at the reader...

    thanks
     
  5. JellyBeing ALL. THE. BUTTS.

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    Hmm... That was an interesting chapter. ::goes off to ponder about that chapter:: lol
     
  6. dancecat120 Gummi Ship Junkie

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    Yeah this chapter was quite weird...

    I was bored and wanted to make it different

    the next chapter will be back from Kairi's view again :)
     
  7. JellyBeing ALL. THE. BUTTS.

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    Different is good. I liked it, it just makes me think. lol
     
  8. dancecat120 Gummi Ship Junkie

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    :D

    I am taking a break before starting the next chapter
     
  9. JellyBeing ALL. THE. BUTTS.

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    It's good to take breaks. Because I've certainly taken loooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooong one. lol I'm torn at your poll though... can't decide if she should kiss him back or push away. Both would make an interesting chapter......hmmmmm
     
  10. dancecat120 Gummi Ship Junkie

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    :)

    I can't decide either... there for I made a poll


    Some one said she should kill him

    :D
     
  11. JellyBeing ALL. THE. BUTTS.

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    Self: Nuh-uh, Roxas can't die.
    Person who voted: Why?
    Self: Well...cause I said so! ::Sticks tongue out::

    haha... Only time will tell Roxas's fate, right?
    ::going off to vote::
     
  12. dancecat120 Gummi Ship Junkie

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    I don't really want to kill him. Kairi would never in my story. I just always put up that kind of choice for fun :)
     
  13. *dancewaterdance* King's Apprentice

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    HOLY CRAP!!!!!! :eek: :eek: :eek: :eek: :eek:
    Oh well, great story! These are really getting better
     
  14. dancecat120 Gummi Ship Junkie

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