http://kingdom-triforce.deviantart.com/art/Kairi-68159187 Alrite so here's a drawing of Kairi that I did. It's not fully complete but this is wat I have so far... Currently, I'm a bit busy fixing up on a pic of Vincent, Cloud, Riku, and that guy from FFVSXIII...I haven't even started on Roxas, Namine, or Sora but I plan to do them all.
It's looking pretty good so far. :3 If possible, maybe adjust the edges of the face to make it a tiny bit slimer - I know she's looking down at Sora and that the face would have a more round effect because of that, but slim it in some more on the left part of her cheek (her right). When you work with the hands, try to shade it so that you can vaguely see the joints of her fingers to avoid a flat look. Pay extra heed to the shine of the hair in the sunrise's setting - don't make it too dark, only where it is higly necessary. When you get back to this picture, you will most likely spot the parts you wish to change. This realistic style can be extra tricky but it is looking rather good so far. :3
Apparently, I've known bout all those problems before I even posted it up...Problem is, I'm really busy with life and/or other drawings...^_^
Very nice job. Good proportions and the eyes are good. I find the eyes the hardest thing to do in the whole face and body.
Her face seems kind of wide, so slim it down like cocohints said. Her hair could use some more shading towards the top right area. Try adding a small amount of space between her two fingers that are closest to the right side of the papaer. Besides that its good :D
