Traditional Art Kairi Sunset Drawing

The coloring could have been better, I know, but I want to show you all I really can draw!!!

 

Most disturbing thing is the eye. It should be tilted with the head! Not straight plus it's too small. Colors are great though it could better without the black spots (lines are perfect so leave them in, of course xD) in the hair and on the ear. The skin under the nose should be less noticable, you know where it curves into the upper lip. The orange spots on the lighter yellowigh color and outlines are best without, unless you made it smugdey looking. And yes, you know how to draw, and nicely.​

 

Thanks for that. Yeah, I should probably fix those...:)

 

Copying images that already have been previously drawn is not a very good practice to do, because it give the artist no imagination to explore or give and originality to a picture. It's just another copy of a picture, nothing special.

Something else that you could do that will help with that originality is using pictures as a resource of a certain pose of a person, or the clothes on the picture for an example instead of copying the whole picture and not giving any imagination to your art.

 

thanks for your advice I'll try something different next time.

 

You can draw. Just draw something that was never drawn before. :3 *purrs* Just think of a background, how s/he will look and then draw at your best way. ^^ You did this one nicely but you need to fix the eyes just like everyone says.

 

OK, I'll definitely do that!

 

Awww!
xD

I love it!
But you have the eye.. really off. Her lip should be slanted down more, like she was looking up. She got her eye itself right it's just her eyelid. <33
Awesome job!

 

I think the eye looks great. Probably the best part of the entire picture. What I don't like are the lips. They seem too jagged instead of what needs to be a smooth flow to them. 9/10