Traditional Art Kairi Namine Picture

YAY more pictures!!!!!!!

 

Thanks! It took forever.

 

That is really cool looking, with the nobody/heartless keyblade thing. I like it. 8.5/10

 

that idea came to me randomly. lol thanks.

 

If this offends you, forgive me, but dang...that picture oddly scares me a bit. So, since for scaring me, it looses deduction, 8/10. It's good and all, but the eyes are the thing that scares me.

 

Eh...it's okay. The colors are accurate and the Keyblade is cool. I guess for a drawing, it's pretty well done, but the flow doesn't go well. 8/10

 

I'm not offended!!!! It kind of creeps me out too.

 

hmm not bad^^ but it also creeps me out.....

 

i don't want to yanj ur chain but your not very good..... maybe you could try something else.... it just looks like art isn't ur thing

 

Oh wow! =D

It's very symmetrical[sp] I really like what you've done! The eyes are perfect the keyblades are killer, just wow, awesome job! 8.9/10

 

A cool idea, but the girls do look kind of odd. It's not because of something not being symmetrical but...I don't know, just looks kind of odd to me.

 

Nice drawing! ^^ I like teh keyblade design also!

 

I really love art, it is my thing, I just need to get some of my better pictures of stuff.

 

Same here. ^^ Ah. You made more? I'd love to see them. ^^

 

I'll put more up here.

 

Okay then. ^^

 

lol. yeah, I'm working on some new pics at the moment...

 

I'll take a look at them tomorrow. I g2g now. Later!

 

bye! see ya later!

 

Good concept, but It looks really childish.
First of all, I THINK you're going for a anime style, yes? Well, in anime, the mouth is never really a curved or straight line. It's usually two or three lines showing out where the two lips meet or the upper lip and the bottom lip is shown as a curved line though. The eyes are large, but not tall. Considering that anime style comes from japan where in real life, the japanese have smaller eyes, this concept is in the drawings as well.

There are MUCH more pointers I can give you, but the best I can say is to look up some art tutorials on google or deviantart. If you're serious about your drawings, this will help you improve.