Traditional Art Kairi and Roxas

Well...I drew Kairi and Roxas just a couple seconds ago. I think it's okay. Probably not my best drawing but...I like it. So...Does anyone have any tips or comments?

And yes...I know the poem is pretty bad. But once again. It's wasen't one of my best. By the way...I know the writing is bad but I just put the poem there because...Well that space looked SO empty.
But if anybody wants to know what it says.....

I'm not breathing,
But I'm still standing.
I'm afriad,
But I'm not going to run away.
I'm dead,
But you still smile at me.
I'm cold-hearted,
But you still believe I have a warm soul.
I'm a nobody,
But tell me the person
You love is a somebody.
I'm the person you love.

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THat's good! THe drawings are probably better than mine because I never tried to draw kiri or Roxas.

 

2 thumbs up!love the picture AND the poem!!

 

Oh, thanks guys. ^^

 

Ooh, very nice, and I love the poem. Roxas is drawn just a little bit better than Kairi, but otherwise, you did wonderfully! :glomp: Great job! :)

 

Thanks...I drew Roxas better on purpose...lol.

 

It needs some work:

Roxas' body needs more shape and it makes him look way too thin.

 

The poem and the drawing is totally sweet. Maybe you should add some more shading to it...makes it look cooler.

 

Yeah. I really need to work on my shading and body shapes.