Not liking it very much, take out the pentool by his hand, it messes with the flow, the focal point is obvious at first but looking at it for too long you kind of lose sight of it. Put some black over the affects on the far left, that may help.
whoa uhhhh I think this is ugly Like cin said, even though you notice K`, you kind of lose track of him and your eyes wander, and they never really settle back unless you 'reset' your eyes. also stop using K` holy **** everyone uses him KoF sprites can go suck my balls especially angel's