He is my savior He is my best friend He protects me He has saved me My sins have vanished Because of him My pain is gone For he has taken it This man is the son of God He died on the cross To make up for all sins He has saved us all I know he's a hero He has saved us all I have been rescued That is why I worship him On this day Thousands of years ago This man had been Ressurected He came back to help us To show us the way That is why we celebrate this day The day we call Easter This man's name is Jesus And he is my savior He demolished all sins And protects us from above~ Well, since it's Easter, I'm feeling a bit religious today... If this happens to offend anybody because they are a different religion or something, I am sorry... I did not make this to offend anybody in any way... I just felt like I should make a poem about the Lord... >>
Not bad. I like the idea, but a lot of it is just a statement and not much of your own ideas put into it. Overall not bad though.
Being offended by this is like being offended by the "under God" part of the Pledge of Allegiance. If you are so shallow-minded as to not even be able to read a few words about another religion, then you are pitiful person.
