Traditional Art Japanese looking Girl with hair

Tell me what you think and i want you to know ahead of time that i get easily offended but you can go ahead and make what ever comments you want.

 

1: Her face is too bug

2: line paper= BIG NO

3:how does she look like a Japanese girl when she does not have a face?

4:work on it, it looks like a plastic wig

 

I really like her hair style.

But she needs a face.
D:

 

You need to make the hair more free flowing. More lines and loose. Look around for examples or at your own hair. It's not clumped up like that. But it's a nice start.​

 

I like it, it's a good start, but add a face, and make the hair look more realistic.

 

she didn't want to make it THAT realistic. and the face isn't there cuz she's still practicing faces.

 

I agree, add the face to make her look pretty~!! =D

Yes the hair does look a little stiff, but just add a few whisps or something and it will be fine :3
Face! Face! Face! >8D

 

ok, illl try to add a face but im not good at it. well, i didnt add a face because i didnt want it to look all cartoonish, if u know what i mean.

 

Eh...I don't like it. Obviously, you need a face, but the hair looks like a wig. Unless you wanted it to look VERY abstract, I would change it.

 

It looks fine to me.Give it a face.I like the hair.Looks,Mulanish.Hahaha

 

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What he said xD​

 

bout time someone friggin agree'd with me -_-'