It's Raining men? (losers chapter 1)

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How did Sora become shirtless? (Please read story. Please. *is begging* :) :) )

  1. Well, you know girls, you can't trust them with a guy that has abs . . .

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  2. Sora lost a bet

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  3. Sora got hurt

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  4. It's in the wash.

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  5. Sora's shirtless? *rushes to the scene with camera*

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  1. Rayeofsunshine Destiny Islands Resident

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    Yeahhhhh! My favorite part of the three part story! THe lost, the liars, and a lot of other losers!
    For those who care, this is a while after "The liars" so, they are two different stories that connect to eachother!

    This is my favorite because It has my oc's!

    Rhy-en
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    Kyli
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    Chapter 1: Bit 1- Dream
    *new part*
    The silence echoed horribly in her head.
    The girl stood in the middle of the white nothingness. She did not know where she was, or why she was there. She just stared down at her blue boots.
    “KAIRI!â€
    “SORA!â€
    “RIKU!â€

    The girl made a gasp. Three voices had just yelled out names from the void. She turned around, and saw no one.
    More voices started talking, whispering, all at once.
    “How does it feel like, Sora? How does it feel to know you have lost.â€

    “How could you do this? I trusted you!â€

    “I would like to say I’m sorry, but you know how much I hate to lie.â€

    She felt a sickening drop in her heart. There was a yell of pain.
    She yelled too, clutching the sides of her head, and dropping to her knees. Tears streaming down her face, she muttered, “Shut up! Shut up!â€
    Sobbing with her eyes squeezed shut, she waited for the noise to stop.

    Everything grew quiet, along with her sobs. Bewildered, she opened her eyes, and discovered she was lying on a thick carpet of green grass. She felt it with her fingers, testing if it was real.
    “Kyli!†A girl yelled her name above her.
    She looked up to see a girl with spiky hair. She was looking down at her with concern.
    “Are you alright?â€
    Kyli said nothing, still shocked. She got up to her feet, shakily. She muttered “I don’t know.â€
    “Well, no offense, but this isn’t exactly the time to have a random space-out. Hacker is on the Radio.â€
    Her vision still seemed to be blurred. Her spiky haired friend appeared to be a smudged painting. This was all very difficult. Her dizziness didn’t help either.
    In her friend’s hand was a radio. She picked it up with difficulty, still feeling as if she was on a rocking ship.
    She held it up to her ear, and heard a fuzzy voice talked out of it.
    “I’m getting a sign of an unidentified space craft coming into our atmosphere. The secretary of defense is going nuts! You were right all along!â€
    She smiled, massaging her temples, and groaning “Thanks Hacker.â€
    “No problem, Angel.†There was a clicking noise, then the voice started talking again. “Hey, I think we might have something here. Listen to this.â€
    There was more clicking, and then a new voice came onto the radio. A woman’s voice that was very robotic and brisk.
    “State your identification.â€
    There was a second of silence, and then a new voice spoke. This was young, and male.
    “Um, Sora.â€
    “You are unauthorized to be in Silver city boundries. You will be exterminated in 10 . . .â€
    “Wait!†The second voice yelled. “I’ll leave!â€
    “ . . . 9 . . . 8â€
    Kyli looked up and saw the tiny space ship in the sky.
    “. . .7. . . 6 . . .â€
    The ground 20 yards away from her started opening up, revealing a weapon. It pointed up to the tiny ship.
    “. . . 5. . . 4 . . . 3 . . .â€
    Kyli held her breath, waiting for the impact.
    The space ship was trying to change course, as quickly as it could.
    “ . . . 2 . . .1 . . .â€
    There was a horrible sonic boom as the weapon fired a sort of energy up at the ship. The ground shook as if it were an earth quake.
    Kyli and her friend staggered, and fell to their knees.
    She looked up to see an explosion that was once was the small space ship.
    “Please be alive! Please be alive!†She muttered, closing her eyes.
    She opened them again, and watched the pieces of the ship fall towards the ground.
    “I think he didn’t make it.†The friend said.
    Kyli closed her eyes, sadness touching her heart. But then, something shocked in her brain. She got up, and held out her hand in front of her. She felt an odd
    sensation in her hand, and a golden weapon appeared.
    She pointed it up to the sky where the ship had been, and a light burst from the end of the weapon.
    The light blinded her for a second, and the next thing she knew she was laying on a bed.


    Chapter 1: Bit- 4? Raining MEn?

    Sora was in between sleep and awake. His eyes were closed, but he could still hear whispers from all around him.
    “Hope he’s alrightâ€, “Lucky he’s aliveâ€, “That was scary.â€
    Sora could hear the words, but he could not understand them. His head hurt too much to let anything sink into his brain at the moment.
    “Do you remember what Kyli said? He was looking for his girlfriend. Her name was Kairi, or something.â€
    At the sound of this name, Sora’s eyes snapped open. He knew what his goal was now: To find and rescue Kairi.
    He looked to the ceiling, but didn’t let his eyes linger for long.
    “He’s awake!†One of the voices gasped.
    He sat up, and turned around. As he stood up, an agonizing pain shot through his leg. He collapsed back on to the bed, groaning in pain.
    “You’re leg’s broken, genius!â€
    He then took a moment to recognize his surroundings. He was in a large room filled with kids around his age and younger. It was also filled with rusty bunk beds, and various items such as a broken ping pong table, a television with a hole in the screen, and many other items that seemed to be stolen out of a junk yard.
    Kids were passing by him, staring oddly at him. When three girls walked passed, and started giggling, he noticed he didn’t have a shirt on.
    He ctched the bed sheets, and wrapped them around his torso.
    “Where’s my shirt?â€
    A girl with red hair held up a piece of clothing with rips, tears, and a large burn hole that took away most of the clothing. “You mean this thing?â€
     
  2. twilightsora13 Destiny Islands Resident

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    *sitting in a corner with a camera*
    hmm, let's see. how did he lose his shirt.....?
    I'd say he lost a bet. and judging by the burn hole, maybe a bet with axel?
     
  3. Rayeofsunshine Destiny Islands Resident

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    *evil Laugh* WRONG! XD Srry, couldn't resist.

    He probably didn't make the bet, but someone else did . . . a girl . . . (later in the storyXD)

    Copy the pictures you get of sora, and send them to me!
    It's actually a few of these answers . . .

    Thankyou SOOO MUCH for reading!
     
  4. Naminé_ Merlin's Housekeeper

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    I'm thinking that perhaps Sora was injured..seeing as he has a broken leg. I'm interested in knowing how your three stories will be tying together. It must be difficult to be writing all three at the same time since they are apparently set during different times. You'll have to make up a timeline for me~! I AM a blonde, afterall. =D
     
  5. Rayeofsunshine Destiny Islands Resident

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    XD Well,
    The lost is sort of through the whole time line, starting from 13 years earlier of the present (when sora is 16) and it ends after the whole series thing.
    The Liars only happens through a few months after the ending of KH2, but the characters (the "Liars" that the story is named after), still are strong characters through out the seriese, and Losers are after Liars, and they go through to the end.
    Wow, try to understand that, If you do, I'll give you a cookie.
     
  6. Naminé_ Merlin's Housekeeper

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    CoOOookie! *pout* I just finished all my Oreos.
     
  7. Rayeofsunshine Destiny Islands Resident

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    Oh, you poor soul! *Gives an imaginary oreo, and a glass of milk*
     
  8. Naminé_ Merlin's Housekeeper

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    You DO love me! *gasp* <33 Lol. I'm going to have to go offline for a while. I'm at work o-o; Do send me that PM though! I wanna knooooow.
     
  9. Rayeofsunshine Destiny Islands Resident

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    I sent you the pm . . . a while ago!
    I'm in school . . .
     
  10. JellyBeing ALL. THE. BUTTS.

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    Nice job. I like your stories. Hmmm.... I think I'm the one who ripped off Sora's shirt and taking pics right now lol. Since I like your story, I'm going to spread the....................REP! :D
     
  11. Rayeofsunshine Destiny Islands Resident

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    The truth of it is, It's a lot of those reasons. He DID get hurt, but the Girls had a bet on who got to take his shirt off when he was unconcious! And any one in there who owned a camera, (*coughRhy-enMyOCinthisStory*) Took pictures of him!
    Thankyou soooo much for reading!
    And PM me your story when you're done!
     
  12. JellyBeing ALL. THE. BUTTS.

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    I have the next chapter done... Woo chapter 4 is done. It should be up in.... well a few hours. It's very late where I am so I''ll wait for a better time to post it. It's kind of long, hope you'll like.... it has some pretty funny parts....hehhe :D
     
  13. Rayeofsunshine Destiny Islands Resident

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    Yeas! It's updated!
     
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