It's never to Late

I said no to protect myself
I cared
You never cared
It’s never to Late, you said
We can make this work
Stay with me
I love you, stay with me
It’s never to late, you said
When I said no
I meant it
Leave me alone
It is to late
When I said no

What do ya' think? >.> <.<​

 

its cool awesome job! :D

 

O.O
Thanks! =D
I glad you like it.

 

sure thing :D
it's realy good

 

Very nice, but I think instead of 'to' you meant 'too'? And possibly put an apostrophe around no? And I don't know if it's on purpose or not that you capitalized Late...but otherwise, it's a lovely free-verse poem, although with a tinge of sadness (for one side anyway lol), it has a nice adamant feel to it. Good job. :)

 

Stupid Word processer! xD
Thanks..I'll fix it later *ish lazy*

 

lol Well otherwise, you did a great job! :D Just curious, but what inspired you to write about this?

 

I wrote this some time last week. But got REALLY lazy on posting it. I was inspired by the Song " Never to Late" By Three Days Grace. =/ lame dude...lame..

 

KxR

<3 I really liked this ^^

The idea of letting something go to protect ourselves from being hurt is all too common and one that I am sure many can empathise with.

lol I like your source of inspiration :P Music FTW

There is a strength about this one that I like ^^

Good Work :)​

 

I think I did a really good job wiht this one too. I had fun writing this. xD
it just came on the radio, and then this is what happen. xDD

Thank you for your support CtR! <333

 

dont know why but i feel there is a deeper meaning behind the meaning your presenting in this piece

 

Really? A deeper feeling? There really isen't another meaning to it.

 

what were you thinking of when you were writing this? what inspired you?

 

I was really bored. but normaly my poems are like..happy love poems..or something like that..more like hatered poems.. >.>
but the song "never to late" By three Dace grace is what inspired me.

 

Really nice poem its good

 

Thank you! <3

 

Okasan!!! U never told meh that joo wrote a poem!! >.< It's good! XD XD and I LOVE THAT SONG!!! :D :D when i read the title to ur poem that was the first thing that came to mind... >_>

 

This is a good poem.

You can tell it really has meaning and probably relates to your life.

ZOMFG there are so many talented poets here I never noticed.

Good job.
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