Digital Art It's my turn to protect you

Discussion in 'Arts & Graphics' started by Noroz, Aug 7, 2012.

  1. Noroz I Wish Happiness Always Be With You

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    It has been forever since I made a sign. New HDD with none of the older Brushes, etc.

    Anyway, I prefer to be a bit minimalistic and use grunge brushes.

    Render I used


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    Comments and Criticism is highly appreciated.


    PS: I'm not too fond of the text.
     
  2. T3F Chaser

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    I quite like this...a few pointers through:
    Move the render a little closer to the centre, so that the viewer is not looking to opposite sides of the sig to see the render and the text
    i like the teal, but i think if the original render had red in it then its better if you use a colour that compliments the render. That way it doesnt look so monotone (not that yours does) and its easier to work with
    with the text: Id move the 'noroz' text above the other line, and have some kind of fancy font. The rest of it is kinda boring so you meed something to make it 'pop'. I would also make the second line a smaller font, so that it fits well with the 'noroz' text. The placement is good, but it can be better.
    It could do with a little more brushes. I know you like minimalism but it seems just a tad empty.

    I'm more or less nit-picking, so im sorry if i sound harsh. Good job though! :)