It wasn't right-a very sad song in my opinion

Okay, I've only written the 1st verse and the chorus of this song. Its very sad. Its supposed to be about a little girl who finds out on TV that her dad died in a war. lol. I just killed the plot.Tell me if u like it!
here goes:
It wasn’t right

Verse 1
I cry
On the telephone
Waiting
For you to come home
Tell me
That I’m right

I cry
In the middle of the night
Daddy
Will you be alright
Tell me
That I’m right

Then I see your face on the television
Tell me I’m not seeing it
Then I stare into your eyes In the photograph
And I know that you’ve ended it

Chorus:
I stood by you
For as long as I could
I helped you through
For as long as I should
But I knew it
Wasn’t right

Now I sit here
Thinking over it
And I couldn’t
Stop it
But I knew it
Wasn’t right

 

That sounds really sad and scary...

 

That's sad, scary, and overall, beastly. Great job.