It Doesn´t Matter Anymore

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  1. Laplace TSUKI NO SHIHAI

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    It may be a hard way
    To forget what brings you pain
    But it really doesn´t matter too much
    Everybody is at your side

    You think everyone betrayed you
    But you are wrong, not right
    Don´t ask me why I know it, because I will not answer to you
    I will just tell you this: It doesn´t matter what happened before

    You think the past will repeat
    That you will have to stake at it again
    That it all your fault
    It doesn´t matter, is just past

    You think they can´t forgive you
    Just give them a chance
    You will see that everything will end fine
    Because it doesn´t matter what happened before

    You think it was all your fault
    That your punishment to die
    You think you should die now
    It just doesn´t matter anymore

    Is just past
    Forget it now
    You have to do it
    Because it just meaningless pain

    Past is past
    So forget is now
    You can´t change what you´ve done
    But you can build a better future

    You have to get your mind out of your past
    Because if you don´t you will suffer forever
    Just follow my words:
    "It doesn´t matter anymore..."
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    I hope is not getting monotone ._.
     
  2. Nymph of Destiny Chaser

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    Nope, it's just not monotone. It's very inspirational and I love it! *hugs* And I'm not just saying that...I really do love these poems!!
     
  3. Laplace TSUKI NO SHIHAI

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    Thank you *Hugs back* ^^ :).
     
  4. Last of the Organization Twilight Town Denizen

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    Good length....good free verse....good message and atmosphere.....I like how your poems are becoming happier.....not saying your other ones weren't good or you shouldn't write about how your actually feeling.....but keep up the good work man......
     
  5. Heaven's Angel Kingdom Keeper

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    IT ROX! XD XD I luv how your poems are becoming happier... keep up the good work! XD
     
  6. Laplace TSUKI NO SHIHAI

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    Is okay, and thanks.

    Thanks 8D.
     
  7. O R A N G E C is the heavenly option

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    Yes! More happy poems!

    *bighugeflyinglargecookieglomp*

    This is a great thing to read if you're dwelling on something bad that has happened in the past.

    You're cheery poems are much nicer to read than the depressing ones. Good job.

     
  8. Laplace TSUKI NO SHIHAI

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    Thanks ^^.
     
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