In the Moonlight

Discussion in 'Archives' started by Death Heart, Nov 14, 2008.

  1. Death Heart Destiny Islands Resident

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    A windy night
    The moon rises above the oceans surface
    Its beauty reflecting through the waters
    The stars sparkle in the night time sky
    Shining above us with everlasting purity

    A young maiden weeps behind a curtain
    Her tears glistening through the moonlight
    Her soft cries echoing through the air, unnoticed

    The world rushes by, occupied in itself

    The moon still shines on this forgotten world
    Light dances off of a crystal mirror
    Portraying the things we fear most

    Somewhere, a young girl cries
    Waiting for someone to answer her calls
    But no one has come
     
  2. The Fifth Element Traverse Town Homebody

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    Wow.....just.......wow. That was very good. This is very deep and I can almost see it thanks to your descriptiveness(is that a word?lol). This was great though!!