In The Devils Eyes.

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  1. Jordier0xs0x King's Apprentice

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    OK I'm bored, so I'm writing a story...It might not be too good because Its late over here so yeah. And Its not about Kingdom Hearts

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    Kaylen sat on her single desk, tapping her fingers on its fine wood, which had been written on with pen, pencil and even carved on. She knew most of the names that had been written and carved, Dilan her older sisters boyfriend, Likli Mosel a girl that went to this school a year before Kaylen, and Juol, a friend of her older sister. There were other names, but they were anonymous to her.
    Her teacher, Mr. Colling, was writing on the wide black board that stood before her and the rest of her class mates. But obviously her teacher didn’t know that no one was coping down the maths sum in their books. He, Mr. Colling, didn’t call it maths, he called it ‘Getting ready for later life’ but it was pretty obvious. The black shirt her teacher wore waved about as he made numbers and words on the black board with a clack clack clack.
    Sitting beside Kaylen was her best friend Moirine who seemed to be off in her own thoughts. Beside Moirine was Mat Cadem who seemed to be showing off in front of his friends. ‘Men,’ a slight smile appeared on her face ‘you can never win’ she realized a white piece of paper sat on the table just touching her hand. She looked towards Mr. Colling and opened the small piece of paper, it read:

    What are you going to do these school holidays? Our family is going camping in the mountains and I think Alana is going over seas, so you will be all alone.

    She didn’t need to ask whose letter it was. Kaylen looked towards Moirine and Moirine gave a pitiful smile. She knew this was going to happen, that her two best friends were going away for the school holidays. Kaylen picked up her pencil beside her book and took one more glance at her teacher, who was still clack clack clacking at the black board, before writing on the white piece of paper:

    I’m not sure, but I think Dad wants me to baby-sit for the holidays. It’s OK though, I have nothing else to do.

    She passed the note to Moirine who read it and sighed, and was about to pick up her pencil when their teacher swung around and turned to look at his class. He began pacing up and down the room and stopped in front of Mat, who had stopped making jokes.
    “So, why aren’t we copying this down?†Mr. Colling made the question to Mat
    “Uh...Because—“ Mr. Colling cut Mat off “I gave you all Instructions to copy this,†He pointed towards the board “down. Has anyone done it?†A hand shot up in the air and Mr. Colling sighed “Anyone other then Jake?†No hands flew up this time “Then, copy it down!†and a rattle of pencils and pens filled the room, even Kaylen picked up her pencil and started writing down what was on the board.
    10 minutes passed and people were putting down their pencils. The bell gave a loud riiiiing and kids got up from their desks “I will see you all after the school holidays†Mr. Colling started wiping the white chalk from the board.
    When Moirine and Kaylen was outside with bags on their backs, they met up with Alana “Well, I will see you two after the holidays. Mum said we are leaving straight away.†Moirine and Kaylen nodded as Alana turned away. After Alana was gone, Moirine turned towards Kaylen “Sorry Kaylen, I have to go to. I will see you later, OK?†Kaylen could only nod as Moirine turned away and then Moirine said “I will write†She waved to Kaylen as Kaylen waved back. This was going to be a long holiday.
    When Kaylen got home, her little brother zipped past her and she looked in shock. She heard laughter coming from him, and it was obvious he had stolen something. Kaylen walked upstairs to her room and opened the door. Her room was dark from being closed up all day, and she dumped her bag on the ground beside her bed and opened the curtains. The rush of light waved in the large room which made the purple walls light up. Her bed was single but it could fit two people in it and the white desk on the other side of the room with her computer placed upon the desk, lit up. Kaylens room seemed nice with light in it, she had never really noticed.
    Kaylen got dressed into her normal clothes and sprawled herself onto the bed. She was tired and annoyed by her friends’ disappearance. ‘So soon,’ she thought ‘Just so soon’ but she pushed that thought out of her head.
    Suddenly a loud bang came from outside and she heard her little brother scream and cry. ‘Before I look out the window, I better grab John’ so she ran downstairs to the little body, lying on the ground. She realized he wasn’t making a sound, or moving his chest “J-John?†She moved slowly towards the body and suddenly covered her mouth in fright. Blood was lying on the ground, where John lay.
    Kaylen felt tears in her eyes “Oh no...†she whispered to herself but she knew it was true, she knew he was dead. Footsteps could be heard from the kitchen and she backed away, nearly falling over the steps.
    A hand grabbed her, and just when she was going to scream, the hand covered her mouth “Shhh...†Kaylen could hear a soft deep voice behind her and struggled to get out of his reach. Then, just as quickly as it began, another man followed by men in black cloaks, came from behind the kitchen wall. Kaylen could hear a number of different shouts.
    “There! There they are!â€
    “Quick let’s get them!â€
    “They will get away!â€
    The man in front put up his hand to stop them, and it worked. The man in black stepped forwards and a deep voice echoed in the house “Thom, you have put up a fight, but you must give us the girl†the man behind her, Thom, stepped in front “I’m not an idiot like you, Elyas.†Thom’s voice was smooth and the man named Elyas frowned â€Why must you get in the way, Thom? I don’t want to hurt you†Thom gave a bitter laugh and suddenly something silver shot past her ear.


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