I'm just wanting your opinions on a couple of things, I've started to digitally draw my lineart lately and I wanted to know, have I improved at all? Last year: http://shinobiofthedark.deviantart.com/art/Gift-for-a-friend-Analy-106569211 This year: http://shinobiofthedark.deviantart.com/art/Dev-ID-Phoenix-131046071 Don't want any CnC on the first one since I have already submitted it in an earlier thread. But CnC on the second one is welcomed. And I know the shading on the hair is crap, I got lazy near the end.
You've definitely gotten better. You've a better understandings of proportions now, which is a huge plus, of course. The shading of the face is very well done and I won't complain on the hair. lol Though for some reason, the head does still look slightly...long—er—vertical-ish. Maybe you need to add more fluff to hair. I think that's what seems a bit off. The face cutting is fine when you look at it without the hair, then as a whole, it looks long again. I think it might be the hair. It needs more volume. Otherwise, great job. Shows what practice can do for you. Awesome.
