alright, so i wrote a book called Immolation. i wanna c how many ppl want 2 read it. its kinda like Final Fantasy 7, so...lets see. this is just like a movie preview... When someone told me that I would have to destroy my own family, I thought they were crazy. But, as terms came to pass, and fate finally stood in the way, I understood what they had meant by that. Destroying my family, by killing them, was far from what they had meant. They meant by betraying, not murdering. When I had figured that out, it was far too late to change what I had done. I was fourteen. Kalinti was fourteen, as well. Here was what had happened. Kalinti had asked me to meet him outside Taseraunt, that night. We were young, and naïve. What could I say? I couldn’t…so, I met Kalinti outside the Square at midnight. “Zena,†he said. “I want to join Organization 41’s Soldiers.†“What?†I exclaimed. “What? Why?†“I have to do something with my life,†He told me. “Zack and I have already packed. We’re leaving tomorrow morning.†“Do your mom and dad know?†“Yes,†Kalinti replied. “Zack’s do too. Don’t worry, we’ll be fine.†“But, Organization 41 is evil, Kalinti,†I said. “You’d be evil…†“No, Zack and I are out to change the way Soldiers look at things,†He told me. “Two fourteen year-old boys?†I asked in disbelief. “Yeah,†He told me. “You don’t think we could do it?†“No,†I shook my head. “You can’t go, Kal. What if they make you evil?†“They won’t,†He said. “I promise you. And once Zack and I make it up to the top of them, I’ll come back for you.†“But, we’ll be in two different worlds,†I told him. “You’d be fighting against me, and I’d be fighting against you. We’d kill eachother.†“No…I told you, Zack and I will change the Organization,†He said. “I promise you, Zena.†“What if they kill you?†“They won’t,†he promised. “If they do, then you’ll know.†“But—†“You can’t persuade me not to,†Kalinti told me. “I’m going.†“No, but I can get Zack to persuade you,†I shot back. “Zack wants to go just as badly as I do,†Kalinti said. “Just trust me, okay?†“I can’t,†I said. “You’re going to get killed!†“No, I wont,†he shook his head. “I’m leaving tomorrow. You can’t stop me.†“Do you promise you’ll come back for me?†I asked. “Yes, I promise,†he promised. “I will…soon. Just keep a look out for me.†And I let him go; I let him walk out on me. I watched as him and Zack walked out of Taseraunt the next morning, and I didn’t try to stop them. I didn’t cry, didn’t protest, and didn’t tell anyone where they were going. Three years later, the Soldiers attacked Taseraunt, destroying everything and anything in their path. Zack and Kalinti were in them, and were following their exact orders. The houses were burning, and the people were running through the streets. Dad told me I had to come, but I refused. I had to find Kalinti, he promised he’d come back for me. So, I looked for him. Finally, I found him. He was marching around with Zack, looking for someone; I could tell by the way their eyes looked around the burning houses. “Kalinti! Zack!†I screamed when I saw them. They both looked at me. Kalinti made sure nobody was looking and dodged over to me. He put his hands on my shoulders. “Zena,†he said. “We have to go back to Casadayona!†“Take me with you!†I begged. “We can’t,†Zack said. “Not this time.†I looked at Kalinti, and he sadly nodded. I backed away from them. “Get out of here, Zena!†Kalinti shouted. “Hurry, before they kill you!†I turned and ran. That was the last time I had seen him until three years ago. Just like Kalinti had said: he and Zack changed the way the Soldiers thought about things. They were now good, and convinced the rest of the Organization to join them in their battle. While that was happening, I had joined my Dad and his friends, who joined the Organization. Kalinti, Zack, and I fought, braving Stairi-the ultimate bad guy-‘s rein. We fought side-by-side, and heart-by-heart. And, then, Stairi killed Zack’s love, Ayr. That’s when everything turned upside-down. Zack went ballistic, and I tried to stop him from going after Stairi, but Kalinti and I couldn’t. Stairi killed Zack, and that left a scar on our hearts. After we defeated Stairi, Kalinti left. He went back to Taseraunt, and I went to Casadayona. I opened a bar, and he stayed hidden. I orphaned two kids: Justin and Mileen. I called him on a regular basis, but there was never any answer. And the only reason why I never gave up hope on him was because I knew he was still with me and was listening to every word in the Voicemails I left him.
Uh... hm. Well I was about to say, "Less talk, more action" but seeing it as a preview, it's alright I guess. But you basically gave the whooole story line, so it would be more like a summary then anything else. And where did this Stairi guy come from and the orphans too? O.o
well..Stairi was a man that was in the Organization. he tried to keep them bad, but they turned good, wantd to murder him, so he fled. we didnt hear of him since then...the orphans came from the streets? justin is kalitni's best friend Zack's nephew and mileen is a little girl they found..:D
