Digital Art I want to show you my run

Discussion in 'Arts & Graphics' started by Noroz, Jan 22, 2012.

  1. Noroz I Wish Happiness Always Be With You

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    Air Gear <3

    v1. [Original color]
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    v2. [Blue]
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    v3. [Purple]
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    Anyhow, CnC highly appreciated as always.​
     
  2. Shiki my waifu is better than yours, thanks

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    Blue and purple suck, color is better.

    But really, overall this is very good.

    I just think color looks better.
     
  3. Dinny I am Anime ( ⚈้̤͡ ◡ ⚈้̤͡ )

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    OOH MY GOLLY GOSH GOLLY <3 AIR GEEEEAAAAAR !!!

    This is a splendid tag of Ikki~
    I also prefer the first version, mainly because of all the colours playing around. I also like the border and textures of the background~
    Overall effect/look is really nice too. The placement of the stock and text plays really well but I'd prefer a different font maybe hehe /shot

    Still. Ikki tag is a splendid Ikki tag c:
     
  4. JedininjaZC Hollow Bastion Committee

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    Great work on the background. I like v1 the best; however you need to work on getting the wording to stand out.
    I suggest coloring it yellow, to bring out the small details on your character's jacket.
     
  5. Iskandar King of Conquerors

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    V1 is probably the best. All of that Blue and Purple just ruin the picture. You don't really have much to stand out, but with color you've got all these different things, like Ikki, and what looks to be a storm(which makes me remember that I need to keep reading past that), and it's a lot more definable.
    I think you've got great placement with the person and background, and while the words do kinda blend it, I think it sorta works
     
  6. Makaze Some kind of mercenary

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    I agree with the consensus: version one is objectively the most aesthetically pleasing. A tip, though. When in doubt, do not make your borders pure black (#000000), but instead something slightly lighter, like #070707. For a demonstration of the difference, see below.

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    Pure black is at the center while #070707 is on the outside. One of them hurts the eyes and the other does not, but the difference is minimal. Please take this extra step to make your images easier on the eyes. The same goes for white and another other colour that you might find on the default palette of your image manipulation software.
     
  7. Excasr The Forgotten XIII

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    They are very good, I liked all of them.
    V1 has good colors, though changing them to blue and purple are highlights the picture too. Really liked the original one, but all of them are amazing!
     
  8. Saxima [screams geometrically]

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    Uf. Those last two . . . not too fond of them . . . Perhaps it's because of all the single color that they're based upon, they feel a little . . . bright.

    That first one though, just the render with the color looks good, but the background, I'm not so sure it should be all just black. Maybe if there was some color back there, then it'd be a little better. I'm also not too thrilled with the choice of font you've goth there, but the style of it doesn't look to bad. Perhaps a different font?