Digital Art I think I'm getting the hang of it...?

So, I wanted to do something with C4D's, and this is my first try in almost a year, so... I dunno. I did some smudging, too. Anyway, here ya go.

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V2


CnC, no ratings, blah blah. With or without text?

 

some parts of it look really choppy.
the right corner looks a little empty but i kinda like it.
and toning down the flare by his head could do some good

sorry for the bad cnc

 

No problem.

Yeah, I tried to use adjustments to tone down the flare by his head, but nothing worked. There are choppy bits, but I'm still getting the hang of things. The right corner is one of my favorite spots. xD I like it how it is.